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  1. Posted: March 13, 2020In: Thriller

    ‘Off The Grid’ After moving off the grid, bickering newlyweds accidentally kill the creepy neighbors kid and now must work together to escape the families vengeful wrath.

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    Added an answer on March 14, 2020 at 12:57 am

    thedarkhorse: Yes, I have read Aristotle's Poetics.? (Several translations to get a full range of the meaning of his words).? It's a timeless classic, a must-read for anyone who wants to become a screenwriter or dramatist. The book deeply informs my m.o. for reviewing loglines, particularly his poinRead more

    thedarkhorse:

    Yes, I have read Aristotle’s Poetics.? (Several translations to get a full range of the meaning of his words).? It’s a timeless classic, a must-read for anyone who wants to become a screenwriter or dramatist. The book deeply informs my m.o. for reviewing loglines, particularly his points about the unity of plot and the necessity of plausible causality between the inciting incident and action.

    [My other pre-20th/21st century text on drama is Hegel’s theory of tragedy, the most original contribution to dramatic theory since Ari.? And, alas, underappreciated.]

     

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  2. Posted: March 13, 2020In: Thriller

    ‘Off The Grid’ After moving off the grid, bickering newlyweds accidentally kill the creepy neighbors kid and now must work together to escape the families vengeful wrath.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2020 at 11:46 pm

    Living off the grid seems to be an incidental not a causal nor a complicating factor of the plot; hence it is extraneous for the purpose of a logline or movie title.

    Living off the grid seems to be an incidental not a causal nor a complicating factor of the plot; hence it is extraneous for the purpose of a logline or movie title.

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  3. Posted: March 12, 2020In: Thriller

    RHSC (red-headed step child)

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2020 at 10:41 pm

    Richiev, as usual, cuts to the chase. However, if the color of the child's hair matters to the plot, if it is a triggering element in the inciting incident (for some irrational reason, it provokes the antagonist), then perhaps it needs to be an element of the logline.

    Richiev, as usual, cuts to the chase.

    However, if the color of the child’s hair matters to the plot, if it is a triggering element in the inciting incident (for some irrational reason, it provokes the antagonist), then perhaps it needs to be an element of the logline.

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