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After discovering his sister, presumed dead, is alive, a soldier must betray his father, the general, to save her.
I suggest that the logline needs to include the subtext.? That it is a war between human and elves is not incidental.Also, why must he save her life?? Why is her life in jeopardy?? Who/what has placed her in mortal danger? And is she presumed dead as a casualty of the war - she's an MIA?? ?Or is herRead more
I suggest that the logline needs to include the subtext.? That it is a war between human and elves is not incidental.
Also, why must he save her life?? Why is her life in jeopardy?? Who/what has placed her in mortal danger? And is she presumed dead as a casualty of the war – she’s an MIA?? ?Or is her presumed demise precede the war?
See lessWhen her daughter is kidnapped at a local convenience store, Midge Phaeton must bring the sex trafficking to its knees, but when she is caught, and beaten to a pulp, she must outsmart the traffickers in order to save her daughter from being exploited or killed.
The more interesting question to me is not whether they will deliver it in one day, but WHY would the buyer be willing to pay double for one day delivery.
The more interesting question to me is not whether they will deliver it in one day, but WHY would the buyer be willing to pay double for one day delivery.
See lessWhen her daughter is kidnapped at a local convenience store, Midge Phaeton must bring the sex trafficking to its knees, but when she is caught, and beaten to a pulp, she must outsmart the traffickers in order to save her daughter from being exploited or killed.
So what's the dramatic problem?? I don't see any conflict, any tension in this setup. What's the inciting incident?? What dramatic problem does the inciting incident create?? Who is the protagonist?? What is the protagonist's objective goal?
So what’s the dramatic problem?? I don’t see any conflict, any tension in this setup.
What’s the inciting incident?? What dramatic problem does the inciting incident create?? Who is the protagonist?? What is the protagonist’s objective goal?
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