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  1. Posted: March 11, 2018In: Thriller

    A small town detective investigates the murder of an attractive couple whose killing appeared beautifully staged in their home, like an art exhibition.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 13, 2018 at 9:25 pm

    Might be more interesting if he's hunting for a serial murderer whose m.o. is to artfully stage the crime scenes, pose the bodies.

    Might be more interesting if he’s hunting for a serial murderer whose m.o. is to artfully stage the crime scenes, pose the bodies.

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  2. Posted: March 11, 2018In: Thriller

    A small town detective investigates the murder of an attractive couple whose killing appeared beautifully staged in their home, like an art exhibition.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 12, 2018 at 12:55 am

    >>>>suffers from mild psychosis due to stopping an antidepressant Really? Is that medically accurate? Whatever, the logline would benefit from a hook, a plot twist that makes it stand out from other murder investigation movies. As is, it seems to be a rather standard issue, boilerplate mRead more

    >>>>suffers from mild psychosis due to stopping an antidepressant

    Really? Is that medically accurate?

    Whatever, the logline would benefit from a hook, a plot twist that makes it stand out from other murder investigation movies. As is, it seems to be a rather standard issue, boilerplate murder mystery.

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  3. Posted: March 4, 2018In: Western

    (Re-post) Post civil war, after escaping a vicious gang of ex-confederates running a slave camp in a sequestered stronghold in the mountains, an ex-union soldier seeks to return and free everyone there.

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2018 at 5:01 am

    Why an ex-confederate?? Why not an ex-Union soldier?Being an ex-confederate means he fought on the wrong side for the wrong cause. Why should an audience root for someone who fought to keep Blacks oppressed and exploited?In time past there?have been westerns with ex-Confederate protagonists.? Like "Read more

    Why an ex-confederate?? Why not an ex-Union soldier?

    Being an ex-confederate means he fought on the wrong side for the wrong cause. Why should an audience root for someone who fought to keep Blacks oppressed and exploited?

    In time past there?have been westerns with ex-Confederate protagonists.? Like “The Outlaw Josey Wales” and “The Searchers”.

    But these are? “woke times”.? Ex-confederate characters no longer get a free pass.

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