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  1. Posted: July 29, 2017In: Comedy

    An immature government programmer’s promotion is denied by his overbearing boss, so he resorts to childish pranks with his beleaguered coworkers in the hope he’ll get transferred.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 29, 2017 at 3:09 am

    Why doesn't the boss just fire them, replace them with more compliant employees? ?IOW: ?what's so special about them that he hasn't or can't?Or if they're any good at what they do, why don't they just take the job and shove it -- find work elsewhere? Which is SOP in the tech industry. ? Why must theRead more

    Why doesn’t the boss just fire them, replace them with more compliant employees? ?IOW: ?what’s so special about them that he hasn’t or can’t?

    Or if they’re any good at what they do, why don’t they just take the job and shove it — find work elsewhere? Which is SOP in the tech industry. ? Why must they save their jobs at this company when there is no lack of job openings in the tech industry for technically proficient people?

    The obvious target audience for this story are people who work in the tech industry and as someone who has worked in the industry as an analyst, programmer and network admin, I’m having trouble buying into the concept.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: July 16, 2017In: Drama

    After a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.

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    Added an answer on July 16, 2017 at 10:34 pm

    As CraigDGriffiths said, you have to reveal the major plots points as outlined in the "Formula" tab.?Loglining is not about hide and seek. ?It's about show and tell. ?Your story is competing for eyeballs, trying to stand out in a crowd of thousands of other ideas jostling for attention. ?You only haRead more

    As CraigDGriffiths said, you have to reveal the major plots points as outlined in the “Formula” tab.?Loglining is not about hide and seek. ?It’s about show and tell. ?Your story is competing for eyeballs, trying to stand out in a crowd of thousands of other ideas jostling for attention. ?You only have a few seconds to grab that attention.?A logline is a one sentence sales pitch.

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  3. Posted: July 16, 2017In: Drama

    After a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 16, 2017 at 8:32 am

    And what exactly does he do to discover "what makes..."? ?What's the visual? Once again, film is a visual medium. What's the visual for "love" and "meaning" in his life? ?What does that scene look like?There are a 10,001+ ways a person can find love and a meaningful life. ?What is the specific way hRead more

    And what exactly does he do to discover “what makes…”? ?What’s the visual? Once again, film is a visual medium. What’s the visual for “love” and “meaning” in his life? ?What does that scene look like?

    There are a 10,001+ ways a person can find love and a meaningful life. ?What is the specific way he chooses?

    IOW: ?what’s the plot? ?What does he try to do to find love and meaning in his life? ?To prove everyone is wrong about him?

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