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When an emo-themed magazine is accused of causing a rash of suicides among young girls, a new editor is hired to change its editorial direction. Before starting, the new editor decides to dig deeper into the past editor?s affairs and discovers that an inmate, who believes she was wrongly accused of murder by the neighbor?s babysitter, was controlling the magazine from prison.
All over the place and at 62 words, too long by a factor of two. ?A logline is a statement of the essence of the plot, optimally ?boiled down to 30 words or less.
All over the place and at 62 words, too long by a factor of two. ?A logline is a statement of the essence of the plot, optimally ?boiled down to 30 words or less.
See lessWhen a high school dance instructor is accused of molesting the principal?s son, a public dance carefully choreographed to expose the real perpetrator ? to everyone?s surprise, the school?s biggest donor ? inspires school officials to rename the school?s auditorium honoring the accused.
Yes, check the advice under "Formula" at the top of the web page. The logline contains 2 spoilers: ?It gives away the Big Reveal ("expose the real perpetrator ? to everyone?s surprise, the school?s biggest donor"); and it also gives away the denouement (" inspires school officials to rename the schoRead more
Yes, check the advice under “Formula” at the top of the web page.
The logline contains 2 spoilers: ?It gives away the Big Reveal (“expose the real perpetrator ? to everyone?s surprise, the school?s biggest donor”); and it also gives away the denouement (” inspires school officials to rename the school?s auditorium honoring the accused”).
A logline should never contain spoilers.
See lessTerrified of his parents suspicions, a freshly outed gay high school senior must get a girlfriend so his parents will think he is straight.
The problem I see is that if he's already been outed at school, it's only a matter of time before his parents find out, right? ?(That's the ultimate doomsday scenario.) ?So I don't see how hitching up for the prom solves that problem. ?At best, it only postpones the day of reveal and reckoning.FurthRead more
The problem I see is that if he’s already been outed at school, it’s only a matter of time before his parents find out, right? ?(That’s the ultimate doomsday scenario.) ?So I don’t see how hitching up for the prom solves that problem. ?At best, it only postpones the day of reveal and reckoning.
Further, when you’ve raised some issue as the greatest problem, the greatest fear the protagonist has, then you’ve got it pay off. ?Anything less is a cheat.
And who is the antagonist, the nemesis in your scenario, anyway? ?I don’t see one.
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