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A misanthropic girl and her rebellious friend are constantly looking for thrills to lighten up their dull lives but when she learns her half-sister has supernatural powers, she realizes having a normal life isn’t so bad.
Loglines are about action, the intentional struggle for an objective goal, not about lessons learned which come as an unintended consequence. ? As suggested by Nir Shelter, the ?"Training" option at the top of this ?web page has guidelines for the elements that should go into an industry standard loRead more
Loglines are about action, the intentional struggle for an objective goal, not about lessons learned which come as an unintended consequence. ? As suggested by Nir Shelter, the ?”Training” option at the top of this ?web page has guidelines for the elements that should go into an industry standard logline.
See lessWhen a superhero is infected with his engineered plague, her ex-boyfriend escapes from prison to steal from a military lab and create a cure before the woman he loves dies in three days.
>>but if the premise raises those questions, wouldn?t that be what makes you want to watch it in the first place?It makes me wonder how much exposition in the form of dialogue and/or flashbacks it's going to take to fill in the backstory to explain how/why he engineered a plague germ. And how/Read more
>>but if the premise raises those questions, wouldn?t that be what makes you want to watch it in the first place?
It makes me wonder how much exposition in the form of dialogue and/or flashbacks it’s going to take to fill in the backstory to explain how/why he engineered a plague germ. And how/why she’s infected. (but not normals?) ?And ended up in jail. Oh, and he’s her ex.
?I get the sense there are really two stories, maybe even 2 films: ?1] how he engineered the plague, ended up in jail all the while — the “B” story — having a relationship w/ the superhero that failed. 2] How he redeemed himself from the mistakes he made, the problems he created in 1].
Right now, I’m thinking the back story is a stronger candidate for a movie.
See lessA teenage girl struggles to deal with everyday life on a planet populated by aliens.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot -- but it doesn't set up a plot. ?Check out "Training" at the top of the web page for guidelines for writing a logline that describes a plot.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot — but it doesn’t set up a plot. ?Check out “Training” at the top of the web page for guidelines for writing a logline that describes a plot.
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