1. Posted: March 6, 2016In:

    When intruders break into her home, the ghost of a paraplegic must save her unsuspecting husband from the intruders’ sinister plan that involves planting venomous snakes in the husband’s closet.

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    dpg Singularity

    Per FFF: >>>And no idea of what kind of interactions a ghost can have with the intruders. Neither do I. If the ghost has any capacity to? interact with the material world, why doesn't she?deal with the snakes herself?? Or the intruders?? End of problem. If she doesn't have the capacity, theRead more

    Per FFF:
    >>>And no idea of what kind of interactions a ghost can have with the intruders.

    Neither do I. If the ghost has any capacity to? interact with the material world, why doesn’t she?deal with the snakes herself?? Or the intruders?? End of problem.

    If she doesn’t have the capacity, then how can she possibly save her husband?

    What are the rules of engagement?

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  2. Posted: March 7, 2016In:

    When a stranger meets an evasive artist, the artist must give into the stranger?s outrageous demands, or risk his identity being revealed and his credibility ruined

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    The premise posits? a dramatic problem, but not a dramatic goal for the artist whom I assume to be the protagonist.? The artist is portrayed as?a rather hapless, passive?victim.? How thrilling is that?The thrill in a thriller?comes from?what?the protagonist proactively?does about his dramatic probleRead more

    The premise posits? a dramatic problem, but not a dramatic goal for the artist whom I assume to be the protagonist.? The artist is portrayed as?a rather hapless, passive?victim.? How thrilling is that?

    The thrill in a thriller?comes from?what?the protagonist proactively?does about his dramatic problem, what he struggles for as an objective goal to solve his problem.?

    So as a result of the stranger’s threats what becomes the artist’s objective goal to proactively free himself of the stranger and his outrageous demands?

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: March 8, 2016In:

    After a shy film student wins a movie contest in the US, he meets his heartthrob at the festival, but they both live in different worlds as she is a pop star and he a suburban guy from Germany.

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    The premise has some good obstacles that stand in the way of love-- prerequisite for the genre.? But it seems to me that "film student" is too general.? What is he?studying to be? An actor, a director, a cinematographer, or (god have mercy on his wretched soul!) a screenwriter.? I think his role inRead more

    The premise has some good obstacles that stand in the way of love– prerequisite for the genre.? But it seems to me that “film student” is too general.? What is he?studying to be? An actor, a director, a cinematographer, or (god have mercy on his wretched soul!) a screenwriter.? I think his role in the film needs to be more specific because plot twists and relationship chemistry may be contingent on what he aspires to be.

    Also, while the premise sets up a?Romeo-and-Juliet??scenario?(a love story about people separated by feuding families, class,, cash, status, language, whatever), he defined rather?non-assertively.??He pines -and what does he do about it?? It doesn’t state what his objective goal is in?terms of a game plan to overcome the obstacles and win her heart.

    So, as a result of falling love with the pop star, what becomes his objective goal, his game plan,? to surmount the barriers that separate them and win her heart?

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