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  1. Posted: March 7, 2016In: Examples

    When a work obsessed L.A Detective causes a car crash while distracted on the job and his kid brother turns up dead by the roadside, it is up to him to find the killer and prove to his mother he was not to blame at the same time he must quell the racial tensions that are heating up all around him.

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    Added an answer on March 10, 2016 at 1:44 pm

    "Crash" is an ensemble piece with so many characters and story threads, I doubt ?it can be reduced to a compact logline.And if you are?a writer like Paul Haggis with a 25 year track record of successful screenwriting, an Oscar, and innumerable contacts in the industry, you don't need one.Wannabes wiRead more

    “Crash” is an ensemble piece with so many characters and story threads, I doubt ?it can be reduced to a compact logline.

    And if you are?a writer like Paul Haggis with a 25 year track record of successful screenwriting, an Oscar, and innumerable contacts in the industry, you don’t need one.

    Wannabes with no track record in the industry,?no contacts, ?no awards, and?no agent should not try this at home.

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  2. Posted: March 9, 2016In: SciFi

    An afflicted paleontologist joins a research crew on a mission to a Jovian moon to recover an ancient fossil that may cure her disease but must escape after discovering the relic can transform them into terrifying creatures.

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    Added an answer on March 10, 2016 at 1:36 pm

    As FFF said, the logline is juggling too many balls. And about fossils being?used to cure diseases.? If it were SOP on earth to vet fossils?for medical uses as well as mount them in museums, ?there would be no problem with that plot point.? But I am not aware -- is anyone? aware? -- that?fossils areRead more

    As FFF said, the logline is juggling too many balls.

    And about fossils being?used to cure diseases.? If it were SOP on earth to vet fossils?for medical uses as well as mount them in museums, ?there would be no problem with that plot point.? But I am not aware — is anyone? aware? — that?fossils are routinely tested for medical properties.

    Or ever tested or used for modern medical purposes.

    So why would they want to use this fossil to cure disease?? How would they even know or suspect or hope?it might be a cure?

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  3. Posted: March 9, 2016In: Horror

    John Dillinger tangles with gunslingers and the undead in a lawless dust bowl town.

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    Added an answer on March 9, 2016 at 2:28 pm

    The logline sets up a situation, a potentially interesting one, but it fails to delineate an objective goal? that indicates? the particular trajectory of?the plot.??To wit, what must?John Dillinger do besides "tangle"?

    The logline sets up a situation, a potentially interesting one, but it fails to delineate an objective goal? that indicates? the particular trajectory of?the plot.??To wit, what must?John Dillinger do besides “tangle”?

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