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  1. Posted: July 28, 2015In: Public

    A cunning serial predator lures a stranded schoolgirl back to his den, where he tries to make her a pawn in his sadistic game, or, can she outplay him?

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    Added an answer on July 31, 2015 at 7:56 am

    When a na?ve schoolgirl is lured into the house of a serial predator, she must outwit him in a game of chess to save her life.

    When a na?ve schoolgirl is lured into the house of a serial predator, she must outwit him in a game of chess to save her life.

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    Added an answer on July 30, 2015 at 11:32 pm

    >> I can?t add this kind of details in the logline True. But I suggest that properly motivating the bad guy would be a plus factor in the story, given the genre. Consider Jigsaw in the original Saw. His victims are not randomly chosen, nor is he capriciously tormenting them for sheer sadistic glee.Read more

    >> I can?t add this kind of details in the logline

    True. But I suggest that properly motivating the bad guy would be a plus factor in the story, given the genre. Consider Jigsaw in the original Saw. His victims are not randomly chosen, nor is he capriciously tormenting them for sheer sadistic glee. He is punishing his victims for their existential “sins”, for frittering away their lives with foolish pursuits, or destructive vices like drug addiction, for lacking the necessary will to live, really live their lives to its fullest potential.

    There’s an intriguing theme being explored. There’s a daemonic method to Jigsaw’s “madness”, more to the story than just some clever plotting.

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  3. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    Twenty years after the horrific slaying of a family, terrified townsfolk wait in fear for the imminent return of the menacing monster that was put away for the crime.

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    Added an answer on July 30, 2015 at 6:17 am

    If he's a "monster", how come's he's released? It would be more credible and a credit to his character (as a "monster") if he escaped. It would enhance his reputation as a malevolent and unstoppable force.

    If he’s a “monster”, how come’s he’s released? It would be more credible and a credit to his character (as a “monster”) if he escaped. It would enhance his reputation as a malevolent and unstoppable force.

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