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  1. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 5, 2015 at 8:48 am

    Then, this may be sufficient: When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in the Treblinka death camp, they must convince the camp commandant to spare their lives. (28 words)

    Then, this may be sufficient:

    When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in the Treblinka death camp, they must convince the camp commandant to spare their lives. (28 words)

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  2. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 5, 2015 at 8:48 am

    Then, this may be sufficient: When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in the Treblinka death camp, they must convince the camp commandant to spare their lives. (28 words)

    Then, this may be sufficient:

    When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in the Treblinka death camp, they must convince the camp commandant to spare their lives. (28 words)

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

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    Added an answer on March 4, 2015 at 11:47 pm

    Based upon true events, when a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up on a train to Treblinka, they have 24 hours to convince the death camp commandant that they are 'Aryans' and save their lives. "Based upon true events"-- I think this is necessary because the setupRead more

    Based upon true events, when a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up on a train to Treblinka, they have 24 hours to convince the death camp commandant that they are ‘Aryans’ and save their lives.

    “Based upon true events”– I think this is necessary because the setup that follows is unbelievable without it. It’s required to establish the credibility of the story. This is an instance when the truth is stranger than fiction.

    “…when a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up on a train to Treblinka” — this is the story hook. These 18 words sell the story. The remaining words are pro forma.

    “…they have 24 hours to convince the death camp commandant that they are ‘Aryans’ and save their lives.” — the dramatic conflict, stakes and objective goal.

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