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"When her seafaring father goes missing, a headstrong girl who grew up upon stories of the sea, disguises herself as a boy and joins the crew of a Phoenician trading galley to discover clues to her dads whereabouts."
When her sailor father is kidnapped by pirates, his headstrong daughter disguises herself as a boy and joins a Phoenician trading galley to find and rescue him. (One plus factor of the premise is its historical malleability: that is, the situation would work just as effectively in any time era untilRead more
When her sailor father is kidnapped by pirates, his headstrong daughter disguises herself as a boy and joins a Phoenician trading galley to find and rescue him.
(One plus factor of the premise is its historical malleability: that is, the situation would work just as effectively in any time era until the early decades of 19th Century when pirates were finally eradicated from the waters of the Mediterranean Sea.)
See lessA washed up celebrity in a bitter custody battle with his scheming ex-wife, is knocked unconscious by a plane crash and awakens believing he is a super hero from one his films.
When a washed-up movie star is knocked unconscious and awakens believing he is a superhero from one of his movies... Well what? I can think of a lot of things to fill out the sentence, but it's your concept, your character. What do you want him to do as a result of the accident? What becomes his objRead more
When a washed-up movie star is knocked unconscious and awakens believing he is a superhero from one of his movies…
Well what? I can think of a lot of things to fill out the sentence, but it’s your concept, your character. What do you want him to do as a result of the accident? What becomes his objective goal? Dedicate his life to rescuing the poor, the downtrodden, fair damsels in distress? Defeat another nefarious conspiracy by the arch (and fictional) nemesis of his films? What?? The logline has possibilities, but I think it needs to hint at the fun & games of the premise that will follow.
(The custody battle, plane crash are details for the story proper — not necessary in the logline.)
See lessA washed up celebrity in a bitter custody battle with his scheming ex-wife, is knocked unconscious by a plane crash and awakens believing he is a super hero from one his films.
When a washed-up movie star is knocked unconscious and awakens believing he is a superhero from one of his movies... Well what? I can think of a lot of things to fill out the sentence, but it's your concept, your character. What do you want him to do as a result of the accident? What becomes his objRead more
When a washed-up movie star is knocked unconscious and awakens believing he is a superhero from one of his movies…
Well what? I can think of a lot of things to fill out the sentence, but it’s your concept, your character. What do you want him to do as a result of the accident? What becomes his objective goal? Dedicate his life to rescuing the poor, the downtrodden, fair damsels in distress? Defeat another nefarious conspiracy by the arch (and fictional) nemesis of his films? What?? The logline has possibilities, but I think it needs to hint at the fun & games of the premise that will follow.
(The custody battle, plane crash are details for the story proper — not necessary in the logline.)
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