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When sinister agents abduct him and his mother, an exceptionally gifted but socially isolated Indian teen discovers that he was genetically engineered for a dark purpose and must choose to either embrace that purpose or fight back on behalf of humanity.
As Richiev said. ? The plot pivots on the purpose he was genetically engineered for.? Which has me almost hooked on the premise.? Almost, but not quite.? Why?? Because I don't what the evil purpose is.? The story hook needs to be fully baited with the specific nature of the destiny for which he wasRead more
As Richiev said. ? The plot pivots on the purpose he was genetically engineered for.? Which has me almost hooked on the premise.? Almost, but not quite.? Why?? Because I don’t what the evil purpose is.? The story hook needs to be fully baited with the specific nature of the destiny for which he was engineered.? What exactly must he fight against?
Also a plot is not about a character having to choose between “X” or “Y”.? It’s about the action the follows from choosing either “X” or “Y”. ? I’m guessing this is not a story a about an anti-hero who fulfills his genetically determined evil fate.? So it’s a no-suspense, no-brainer that he’s going to fight on behalf of humanity.? Well,? how?? What becomes his objective goal?
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I think he needs an objective goal related to his "trade" and character.? Like doing what he does best: the family that befriends him is the mark for his latest con. But then a snowstorm traps him at the scene of his latest crime.? Consequently, there's more dramatic tension.
I think he needs an objective goal related to his “trade” and character.? Like doing what he does best: the family that befriends him is the mark for his latest con. But then a snowstorm traps him at the scene of his latest crime.? Consequently, there’s more dramatic tension.
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Pilot?? So this is the setup for a series?
Pilot?? So this is the setup for a series?
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