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  1. Posted: February 19, 2015In: Public

    Fed up with stiff regulations preventing people from getting the organs they need, Dr. Andrea Sellers dives into the seedy world of the underground organ trade. (1 hour cable drama)

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 20, 2015 at 10:57 am

    I think Richiev is on the right track: the inciting incident needs a strong personal incentive to induce the protagonist to cross the threshold into criminal activity. Walter White breaks bad not because he's greedy for gain, but because he discovers he may soon die of cancer and he wants to provideRead more

    I think Richiev is on the right track: the inciting incident needs a strong personal incentive to induce the protagonist to cross the threshold into criminal activity.

    Walter White breaks bad not because he’s greedy for gain, but because he discovers he may soon die of cancer and he wants to provide enough money to support his family after he’s dead. Misguided but altruistic motives push him over the threshold from a law abiding teacher to a law breaking meth cook.

    And that’s not the back story of “Breaking Bad” — it’s the pilot episode. That’s what a pilot episode does: it establishes the who, what and WHY for all that transpires in the episodes to come.

    This series concept is another variation on the general premise of a respectable, law abiding person “breaking bad”.

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  2. Posted: February 19, 2015In: Public

    Fed up with stiff regulations preventing people from getting the organs they need, Dr. Andrea Sellers dives into the seedy world of the underground organ trade. (1 hour cable drama)

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 20, 2015 at 10:57 am

    I think Richiev is on the right track: the inciting incident needs a strong personal incentive to induce the protagonist to cross the threshold into criminal activity. Walter White breaks bad not because he's greedy for gain, but because he discovers he may soon die of cancer and he wants to provideRead more

    I think Richiev is on the right track: the inciting incident needs a strong personal incentive to induce the protagonist to cross the threshold into criminal activity.

    Walter White breaks bad not because he’s greedy for gain, but because he discovers he may soon die of cancer and he wants to provide enough money to support his family after he’s dead. Misguided but altruistic motives push him over the threshold from a law abiding teacher to a law breaking meth cook.

    And that’s not the back story of “Breaking Bad” — it’s the pilot episode. That’s what a pilot episode does: it establishes the who, what and WHY for all that transpires in the episodes to come.

    This series concept is another variation on the general premise of a respectable, law abiding person “breaking bad”.

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  3. Posted: February 19, 2015In: Public

    For 10 years this man has been having accurate visions of events seven days into the future. Last night he saw his own murder at the hands of a woman he doesn't know.

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    Added an answer on February 20, 2015 at 10:38 am

    >> prior to the vision is up to you but normally no more than 10-15 pages In "The Minority Report", the pre-cog vision that the protagonist will commit a crime occurs about 1/4 of the way through the story (which maps to page 30 standard 120 page length measurement). IOW: it kicks off the 2nd Act. TRead more

    >> prior to the vision is up to you but normally no more than 10-15 pages

    In “The Minority Report”, the pre-cog vision that the protagonist will commit a crime occurs about 1/4 of the way through the story (which maps to page 30 standard 120 page length measurement). IOW: it kicks off the 2nd Act. The first Act establishes the thematic issues on which the accuracy of the pre-cog’s vision about the protagonist pivots.

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