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  1. Posted: January 30, 2015In: Public

    In a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.

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    Added an answer on February 1, 2015 at 8:13 am

    So it's a survival story. A teenage girl versus the cold world and a cruel man. It might help if the stakes involved more than just saving her life, if there was a stakes character, say an even more helpless pre-teen kid (an orphan like herself), whom she must also save (at the risk of her own life)Read more

    So it’s a survival story. A teenage girl versus the cold world and a cruel man.

    It might help if the stakes involved more than just saving her life, if there was a stakes character, say an even more helpless pre-teen kid (an orphan like herself), whom she must also save (at the risk of her own life). This would make her an empathetic character, one the audience will be more eager to root for. (Like Katniss Everdeen in “The Hunger Games”. What makes Katniss a great heroic character is that she’s never fighting just to save her own skin.)

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  2. Posted: January 27, 2015In: Public

    When an earthquake infests an apartment complex with fast-breeding spiders, a young entomologist's plan to save the residents means forcing a war veteran survivalist from his home.

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    Added an answer on February 1, 2015 at 7:40 am

    Coming of Age? He's a precocious kid, has already gotten his degree in entomology while still only a teenager? (My understanding of the 'coming of age' genre is that it spans the teen years.)

    Coming of Age? He’s a precocious kid, has already gotten his degree in entomology while still only a teenager?

    (My understanding of the ‘coming of age’ genre is that it spans the teen years.)

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  3. Posted: January 27, 2015In: Public

    When an earthquake infests an apartment complex with fast-breeding spiders, a young entomologist's plan to save the residents means forcing a war veteran survivalist from his home.

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    Added an answer on February 1, 2015 at 7:40 am

    Coming of Age? He's a precocious kid, has already gotten his degree in entomology while still only a teenager? (My understanding of the 'coming of age' genre is that it spans the teen years.)

    Coming of Age? He’s a precocious kid, has already gotten his degree in entomology while still only a teenager?

    (My understanding of the ‘coming of age’ genre is that it spans the teen years.)

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