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A reticent young mother, grieving the death of her husband on 9 11 joins three widows who take on the U.S. government, looking for answers to the century?s most heinous crime
As Nir Shelter said. Particularly with regard to being more specific about the "questions" they want answers to. There are already "answers" -- an official government narrative based upon an official government inquiry. So the women don't buy it. Why? Although it is conceded that "mistakes were madeRead more
As Nir Shelter said.
Particularly with regard to being more specific about the “questions” they want answers to. There are already “answers” — an official government narrative based upon an official government inquiry.
So the women don’t buy it. Why? Although it is conceded that “mistakes were made”, many people accept the official narrative. Why don’t these women?
And what are the stakes? What difference will it make if they get satisfactory answers? (And from whom? Bush? Cheney? The heads of the CIA, FBI, NSA?) How it will it change or improve their lives?
What’s the time frame of the story, their quest for “answers”?
See lessA man with a rare medical condition has to decide between embracing his final months alive or undertaking an experimental procedure that could extend his life or end it. For #meetup
As Frugal Writer noted the story would seem not to be about deciding to (eventually) decide by the 3rd Act. Rather, the story is about what happens after he decides by the end of Act 1. The inciting incident brings him to a cross roads of two very different paths for the plot. Which path the charactRead more
As Frugal Writer noted the story would seem not to be about deciding to (eventually) decide by the 3rd Act. Rather, the story is about what happens after he decides by the end of Act 1. The inciting incident brings him to a cross roads of two very different paths for the plot. Which path the character will take — must take — will determine the subsequent plot.
But since I have no idea what path the character is to take, I am at a loss to formulate a revised logline that incorporates the author’s intention.
See lessA man with a rare medical condition has to decide between embracing his final months alive or undertaking an experimental procedure that could extend his life or end it. For #meetup
As Frugal Writer noted the story would seem not to be about deciding to (eventually) decide by the 3rd Act. Rather, the story is about what happens after he decides by the end of Act 1. The inciting incident brings him to a cross roads of two very different paths for the plot. Which path the charactRead more
As Frugal Writer noted the story would seem not to be about deciding to (eventually) decide by the 3rd Act. Rather, the story is about what happens after he decides by the end of Act 1. The inciting incident brings him to a cross roads of two very different paths for the plot. Which path the character will take — must take — will determine the subsequent plot.
But since I have no idea what path the character is to take, I am at a loss to formulate a revised logline that incorporates the author’s intention.
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