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  1. Posted: January 13, 2015In: Public

    A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.

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    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 1:55 pm

    A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer able to manipulate time and reality shows up, the hunter becomes the hunted. While "arriving from the alternate reality" may be part of the story, I don't see how it causally connects to the arrival of the killerRead more

    A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer able to manipulate time and reality shows up, the hunter becomes the hunted.

    While “arriving from the alternate reality” may be part of the story, I don’t see how it causally connects to the arrival of the killer for the purpose of the logline or anything else that ensues in the plot.

    The bounty hunter is not in his alternate reality; he’s in the reality of the bar where he becomes the hunter instead of the hunted. That, as far as I can see, is the plot.

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  2. Posted: January 13, 2015In: Public

    A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 1:55 pm

    A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer able to manipulate time and reality shows up, the hunter becomes the hunted. While "arriving from the alternate reality" may be part of the story, I don't see how it causally connects to the arrival of the killerRead more

    A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer able to manipulate time and reality shows up, the hunter becomes the hunted.

    While “arriving from the alternate reality” may be part of the story, I don’t see how it causally connects to the arrival of the killer for the purpose of the logline or anything else that ensues in the plot.

    The bounty hunter is not in his alternate reality; he’s in the reality of the bar where he becomes the hunter instead of the hunted. That, as far as I can see, is the plot.

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2015In: Public

    Investigating a robbery at the State University of New York an FBI agent discovers the item taken was a sample from the Shroud of Turin. This leads him to a conflict with a well funded murderous group of fanatics determined to clone Jesus.

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    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 12:50 pm

    Craig: After watching the YouTub video it occurred to me that a more compelling story might be: what happens if the cloning were to succeed. What kind of modern day Messiah -- or not -- would he be? A modern day "Life of Brian" or? Look at the film franchise created from the premise of cloning extinRead more

    Craig:

    After watching the YouTub video it occurred to me that a more compelling story might be: what happens if the cloning were to succeed. What kind of modern day Messiah — or not — would he be? A modern day “Life of Brian” or?

    Look at the film franchise created from the premise of cloning extinct dinosaurs. Take it to the next step, the next level.

    Suggested working title: Born Again.

    fwiw

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