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After an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.
The principal structural issue I have with the logline is that it seems to have 2 inciting incidents: 1] Being boiled in the vat incites him to wreak revenge on his attackers; and 2] Killing an innocent person triggers his inner demon take revenge on him. It would seem that 2] is a 2nd act complicatRead more
The principal structural issue I have with the logline is that it seems to have 2 inciting incidents: 1] Being boiled in the vat incites him to wreak revenge on his attackers; and 2] Killing an innocent person triggers his inner demon take revenge on him. It would seem that 2] is a 2nd act complication, but it is not the inciting incident of the story.
And why, a prolifer would want to know, didn’t the demon go after the obs when he was murdering innocent unborn children? I don’t which side of the abortion debate your story takes, but the subject is an emotional minefield.
See lessAfter an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.
The principal structural issue I have with the logline is that it seems to have 2 inciting incidents: 1] Being boiled in the vat incites him to wreak revenge on his attackers; and 2] Killing an innocent person triggers his inner demon take revenge on him. It would seem that 2] is a 2nd act complicatRead more
The principal structural issue I have with the logline is that it seems to have 2 inciting incidents: 1] Being boiled in the vat incites him to wreak revenge on his attackers; and 2] Killing an innocent person triggers his inner demon take revenge on him. It would seem that 2] is a 2nd act complication, but it is not the inciting incident of the story.
And why, a prolifer would want to know, didn’t the demon go after the obs when he was murdering innocent unborn children? I don’t which side of the abortion debate your story takes, but the subject is an emotional minefield.
See lessAfter an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.
What's the unifying theme?
What’s the unifying theme?
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