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  1. Posted: November 30, 2014In: Public

    In 2097, Islamic State?s genius operative befriends and covertly recruits the CIA?s foremost agent and develops a weapon like nothing in history or fiction.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 4, 2014 at 4:16 am

    It raises more confusion than curiosity in my mind. A "weapon like none other in history or fiction" strikes me as hyperbolic. Its novelty is not the point for the purpose of the plot; rather, what matters dramatically is the threat it poses. Also, the central focus of the plot (hence the logline) sRead more

    It raises more confusion than curiosity in my mind.

    A “weapon like none other in history or fiction” strikes me as hyperbolic. Its novelty is not the point for the purpose of the plot; rather, what matters dramatically is the threat it poses.

    Also, the central focus of the plot (hence the logline) should be the human element, the double agents, not the weapon. Ultimately, stories are about people, not props.

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  2. Posted: November 30, 2014In: Public

    In 2097, Islamic State?s genius operative befriends and covertly recruits the CIA?s foremost agent and develops a weapon like nothing in history or fiction.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 4, 2014 at 4:16 am

    It raises more confusion than curiosity in my mind. A "weapon like none other in history or fiction" strikes me as hyperbolic. Its novelty is not the point for the purpose of the plot; rather, what matters dramatically is the threat it poses. Also, the central focus of the plot (hence the logline) sRead more

    It raises more confusion than curiosity in my mind.

    A “weapon like none other in history or fiction” strikes me as hyperbolic. Its novelty is not the point for the purpose of the plot; rather, what matters dramatically is the threat it poses.

    Also, the central focus of the plot (hence the logline) should be the human element, the double agents, not the weapon. Ultimately, stories are about people, not props.

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  3. Posted: November 30, 2014In: Public

    A dying playboy has to expose the lying fianc? of a brilliant woman so she can find true love, but falls in love with her himself.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 1, 2014 at 1:30 pm

    Why would the playboy want to rescue the woman -- before he's fallen in love with her? Why would he get involved in her personal life in the first place? What's the trigger, the inciting incident?

    Why would the playboy want to rescue the woman — before he’s fallen in love with her? Why would he get involved in her personal life in the first place? What’s the trigger, the inciting incident?

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