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  1. Posted: November 20, 2014In: Public

    When her bandmates get implicated in a bad drug deal, a geek must gather ecstasy from seagull corpses to repay the debt.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 21, 2014 at 1:19 pm

    Thanks for the clarification. That certainly has comedic possibilities, an unconventional solution to a not so unconventional problem. I can see why you wanted to make it the hook in the logline, but the problem is it's a hook I fear most readers of the logline won't get, one that will raise more quRead more

    Thanks for the clarification. That certainly has comedic possibilities, an unconventional solution to a not so unconventional problem. I can see why you wanted to make it the hook in the logline, but the problem is it’s a hook I fear most readers of the logline won’t get, one that will raise more questions than interest. Alas.

    What’s at stake? That is, what threat will there be to the raver and her bandmates face if the debt isn’t repayed? And is there a ticking clock, a deadline, by which the debt has to be repaid — or else ?

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  2. Posted: November 20, 2014In: Public

    When her bandmates get implicated in a bad drug deal, a geek must gather ecstasy from seagull corpses to repay the debt.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 21, 2014 at 1:19 pm

    Thanks for the clarification. That certainly has comedic possibilities, an unconventional solution to a not so unconventional problem. I can see why you wanted to make it the hook in the logline, but the problem is it's a hook I fear most readers of the logline won't get, one that will raise more quRead more

    Thanks for the clarification. That certainly has comedic possibilities, an unconventional solution to a not so unconventional problem. I can see why you wanted to make it the hook in the logline, but the problem is it’s a hook I fear most readers of the logline won’t get, one that will raise more questions than interest. Alas.

    What’s at stake? That is, what threat will there be to the raver and her bandmates face if the debt isn’t repayed? And is there a ticking clock, a deadline, by which the debt has to be repaid — or else ?

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  3. Posted: November 20, 2014In: Public

    When her bandmates get implicated in a bad drug deal, a geek must gather ecstasy from seagull corpses to repay the debt.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 21, 2014 at 8:40 am

    Uh, is this technically possible? What's the genre of this story?

    Uh, is this technically possible? What’s the genre of this story?

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