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  1. Posted: November 7, 2014In: Public

    When down-to-earth Nadya parts ways with her frivolous sister, following their mother's death, she resigns herself to a life of toil and loneliness. So when love comes to her unexpectedly, even amidst the chaos of the Russian revolution, she takes hold of it with both hands. But can her newfound romance survive his lingering infatuation with a long-lost beauty destined to resurface?

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    >>What is your intention with this logline? What is your intention with the story? What is so unique, what is so compelling about it? What is there about the story that has hooked your interest, made you want to tell it?

    >>What is your intention with this logline?

    What is your intention with the story? What is so unique, what is so compelling about it? What is there about the story that has hooked your interest, made you want to tell it?

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  2. Posted: November 7, 2014In: Public

    When down-to-earth Nadya parts ways with her frivolous sister, following their mother's death, she resigns herself to a life of toil and loneliness. So when love comes to her unexpectedly, even amidst the chaos of the Russian revolution, she takes hold of it with both hands. But can her newfound romance survive his lingering infatuation with a long-lost beauty destined to resurface?

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 11, 2014 at 10:55 am

    >>What is your intention with this logline? What is your intention with the story? What is so unique, what is so compelling about it? What is there about the story that has hooked your interest, made you want to tell it?

    >>What is your intention with this logline?

    What is your intention with the story? What is so unique, what is so compelling about it? What is there about the story that has hooked your interest, made you want to tell it?

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  3. Posted: November 7, 2014In: Public

    When down-to-earth Nadya parts ways with her frivolous sister, following their mother's death, she resigns herself to a life of toil and loneliness. So when love comes to her unexpectedly, even amidst the chaos of the Russian revolution, she takes hold of it with both hands. But can her newfound romance survive his lingering infatuation with a long-lost beauty destined to resurface?

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    Added an answer on November 11, 2014 at 5:25 am

    Well, he comes off looking like the MC. He seems to drive the story, make the major decisions. And perhaps that perception reflects the cultural times of the story, a time when women had fewer rights, less control over their lives. If so, the logline still needs to distill the essence of the plot frRead more

    Well, he comes off looking like the MC. He seems to drive the story, make the major decisions.

    And perhaps that perception reflects the cultural times of the story, a time when women had fewer rights, less control over their lives. If so, the logline still needs to distill the essence of the plot from the woman’s point of view.

    In your 2nd iteration, you say she “throws caution to the wind”. What does that mean specifically? Take a lover of her own? Leave him?

    Given her circumstances, what specifically is her objective goal? What specifically does she intend to do about?

    (I’m posting in this thread to maintain the continuity of discussion.)

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