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  1. Posted: October 1, 2014In: Public

    After failing his final mission to receive his wings and graduate to guardianship, an angel must work with his client – a depressed mime ? to help him discover reasons to continue living and to fulfill his own quest of becoming a guardian angel.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 2, 2014 at 9:13 am

    An aspiring guardian angel has 24 hours to win his wings by saving a washed-up, bankrupt actor from suicide or be cast down into the pit of hell: Hollywood, condemned to be an aspiring but unsold screenwriter forever and ever... and ever.... and ever... But seriously, folks. The human has to be rescRead more

    An aspiring guardian angel has 24 hours to win his wings by saving a washed-up, bankrupt actor from suicide or be cast down into the pit of hell: Hollywood, condemned to be an aspiring but unsold screenwriter forever and ever… and ever…. and ever…

    But seriously, folks.

    The human has to be rescued from something more than mere depression. Depression is a state of mind. What’s the visual on that? The mime must be rescued from the action that his depression drives him to do: commit suicide (and/or kill someone else, too).

    And he’s going to kill himself (and/or someone else) within 24 hours (a ticking clock).

    And the stakes have to be higher for the rookie guardian angel. It has to be his last chance to win his wings. Maybe he’s already failed to prevent 2 other suicides. (He’s on probation, been assigned to the heavenly suicide hotline).

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2014In: Public

    After waking from a coma, a heterosexual young woman begins to believe that the universe is plotting to put her in the arms of the female EMT that saved her life, and away from her male fiancee.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 2, 2014 at 8:48 am

    So she believes that the universe is conspiring against her love life. That's the inciting incident, I guess. Now what happens? Specifically, what does she DO about her belief? How does she act on it? What becomes her objective goal as a result of her delusion? (It is a delusion, isn't it? Or is thiRead more

    So she believes that the universe is conspiring against her love life. That’s the inciting incident, I guess. Now what happens?

    Specifically, what does she DO about her belief? How does she act on it? What becomes her objective goal as a result of her delusion? (It is a delusion, isn’t it? Or is this a fabulist story?)

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  3. Posted: September 30, 2014In: Public

    After waking from a coma, a heterosexual young woman begins to believe that the universe is plotting to put her in the arms of the female EMT that saved her life, and away from her male fiancee.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 2, 2014 at 8:48 am

    So she believes that the universe is conspiring against her love life. That's the inciting incident, I guess. Now what happens? Specifically, what does she DO about her belief? How does she act on it? What becomes her objective goal as a result of her delusion? (It is a delusion, isn't it? Or is thiRead more

    So she believes that the universe is conspiring against her love life. That’s the inciting incident, I guess. Now what happens?

    Specifically, what does she DO about her belief? How does she act on it? What becomes her objective goal as a result of her delusion? (It is a delusion, isn’t it? Or is this a fabulist story?)

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