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  1. Posted: September 30, 2014In: Public

    After the death of his wife, An expert salesman is sent to prison and his children put in to care. Upon his release, He and his confident lawyer brother will take on the courts for custody however will his disabled daughter and young son have adapted to their surroundings and be too little too late.

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    Added an answer on October 2, 2014 at 3:07 am

    It's infinitely harder to win back the lost love and trust of one's children than it is to win back legal custody.

    It’s infinitely harder to win back the lost love and trust of one’s children than it is to win back legal custody.

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2014In: Public

    After the death of his wife, An expert salesman is sent to prison and his children put in to care. Upon his release, He and his confident lawyer brother will take on the courts for custody however will his disabled daughter and young son have adapted to their surroundings and be too little too late.

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    Added an answer on October 2, 2014 at 3:07 am

    It's infinitely harder to win back the lost love and trust of one's children than it is to win back legal custody.

    It’s infinitely harder to win back the lost love and trust of one’s children than it is to win back legal custody.

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  3. Posted: October 1, 2014In: Public

    A short-tempered aspiring hunter gets her dominant arm torn off after saving a friend and must cope with it if she is to ever become the best in the western world.

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    Added an answer on October 2, 2014 at 2:59 am

    >>Describing the arm as her dominant arm? doesn?t seem essential to the story. It would make a critical difference if a right-hander lost his right arm and tried to become proficient with his left ( (Try eating or shaving exclusively with your non-dominant hand.) And to complicate matters, his rightRead more

    >>Describing the arm as her dominant arm? doesn?t seem essential to the story.

    It would make a critical difference if a right-hander lost his right arm and tried to become proficient with his left ( (Try eating or shaving exclusively with your non-dominant hand.) And to complicate matters, his right eye is his “shooting eye” his dominant eye. So I think it’s an important story element.

    But the story is vague, raises questions rather than provide answers. Like: what’s the weapon she hunts with? And what’s the visual for being “the best in the western world”? Winning Olympic gold? The specific contest that defines the “best” ought to be identified.

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