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After being dumped by his longtime girlfriend, a man who believes in eternal love asks for a second chance and they are given the magical opportunity to start from the beginning with what they know today and do better.
>>>When his girlfriend wants to leave him Rather: she leaves him. Period. Full stop. New paragraph: Characters do not merely want. They do . And she leaves him for another guy, too. Give him a rival. That is a stronger inciting incident. It creates more tension, makes his struggle to win heRead more
>>>When his girlfriend wants to leave him
Rather: she leaves him. Period. Full stop.
New paragraph: Characters do not merely want. They do .
And she leaves him for another guy, too. Give him a rival. That is a stronger inciting incident. It creates more tension, makes his struggle to win her back harder.
What rabbit do you plan to pull out of the hat of the plot to make it possible? What’s the magical gimmick?
See lessA regular 20-something year old woman is accidentally dragged in to a crime circle after she is mistaken for a professional hit(wo)man.
Interesting premise for a plot But not yet a plot . And loglines are about plots, not premises. So it needs fleshing out. Unable to persuade a ruthless mobster that she is not a professional assassin, a woman must do X or else Y. What is the X --the objective goal? What is the Y --the stakes if sheRead more
Interesting premise for a plot But not yet a plot . And loglines are about plots, not premises. So it needs fleshing out.
Unable to persuade a ruthless mobster that she is not a professional assassin, a woman must do X or else Y.
What is the X –the objective goal? What is the Y –the stakes if she doesn’t?
See lessWhen medicine and science fail, and the only way to get humanity back on track is to rewind the clock, a group of historians and storytellers sit down to rewrite history
So, revisionist history? That's SOP now. Don't see what's novel here.
So, revisionist history? That’s SOP now. Don’t see what’s novel here.
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