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Abducted as a small child, a college athlete's sadistic mother threatens his championship hopes when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.
I agree that "faith is tested" lacks concreteness -- what's the visual? But I also think that losing concentration for game day is the very LEAST of his problems, of the consequences and skeletons that fall out of the closet as a result of the discovery about the woman he thought was his mother.
I agree that “faith is tested” lacks concreteness — what’s the visual?
But I also think that losing concentration for game day is the very LEAST of his problems, of the consequences and skeletons that fall out of the closet as a result of the discovery about the woman he thought was his mother.
See lessA young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
A super heroine suffering from anterograde amnesia must rely on a skeptical psychiatrist to remind her every day to stop a mad scientist from a quantum experiment that will destroy the earth. "destroy the earth" -- up the stakes: why limit them to homo sapiens. Shouldn't a quantum experiment destroyRead more
A super heroine suffering from anterograde amnesia must rely on a skeptical psychiatrist to remind her every day to stop a mad scientist from a quantum experiment that will destroy the earth.
“destroy the earth” — up the stakes: why limit them to homo sapiens. Shouldn’t a quantum experiment destroy everything?
“skeptical” — he doesn’t believe her story, but indulges her “delusion” as part of her therapy. If not skeptical that than the logline needs something better than “strange” which is too vague.
I suggest adding a ticking clock, a dooms day to increase the urgency. But you specified you have in mind a series. Do you want to stretch it out indefinitely? How long do you think you can sustain the premise (earth about to be destroyed) and the gimmick (but she can’t remember to stop it)?
See lessA young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
A super heroine suffering from anterograde amnesia must rely on a skeptical psychiatrist to remind her every day to stop a mad scientist from a quantum experiment that will destroy the earth. "destroy the earth" -- up the stakes: why limit them to homo sapiens. Shouldn't a quantum experiment destroyRead more
A super heroine suffering from anterograde amnesia must rely on a skeptical psychiatrist to remind her every day to stop a mad scientist from a quantum experiment that will destroy the earth.
“destroy the earth” — up the stakes: why limit them to homo sapiens. Shouldn’t a quantum experiment destroy everything?
“skeptical” — he doesn’t believe her story, but indulges her “delusion” as part of her therapy. If not skeptical that than the logline needs something better than “strange” which is too vague.
I suggest adding a ticking clock, a dooms day to increase the urgency. But you specified you have in mind a series. Do you want to stretch it out indefinitely? How long do you think you can sustain the premise (earth about to be destroyed) and the gimmick (but she can’t remember to stop it)?
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