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  1. Posted: August 18, 2014In: Public

    Identiical Twins living in the Post-Apocalyptic Caribbean have their village attacked by pirates, one of them is taken and the village is destroyed; unable to make contact one devotes his life to saving his brother while the other slowly becomes identical to the very pirates that pillaged his town.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2014 at 8:25 pm

    Okay, but if they are separated as teens, how credible would it be that the pirate brother is acting unwittingly, in complete ignorance? That he doesn't remember, ergo doesn't recognize, anything about the area, or anyone?

    Okay, but if they are separated as teens, how credible would it be that the pirate brother is acting unwittingly, in complete ignorance? That he doesn’t remember, ergo doesn’t recognize, anything about the area, or anyone?

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  2. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A young sheriff returns home to where his outlaw mother was brutally killed to find the girl he grew up with now in charge and wanting the same for him.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2014 at 6:44 am

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one. And I don't see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn't get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother's murderer to jRead more

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one.

    And I don’t see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn’t get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother’s murderer to justice? Say what??

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A young sheriff returns home to where his outlaw mother was brutally killed to find the girl he grew up with now in charge and wanting the same for him.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2014 at 6:44 am

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one. And I don't see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn't get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother's murderer to jRead more

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one.

    And I don’t see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn’t get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother’s murderer to justice? Say what??

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