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  1. Posted: August 17, 2014In: Public

    Suicidal and desperate for death, a young man travels to a house to remove the one element in his life that keeps him going so he can have his death wish fulfilled, his brother.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 18, 2014 at 7:27 am

    Hmm. I have done more than a few suicide interventions, spent h-o-u-r-s listening to people pour out their hearts about depression, personal problems, why they can't go on living and their m.o.'s for terminating their existence. Frankly, the only way the character in this logline would come close toRead more

    Hmm. I have done more than a few suicide interventions, spent h-o-u-r-s listening to people pour out their hearts about depression, personal problems, why they can’t go on living and their m.o.’s for terminating their existence.

    Frankly, the only way the character in this logline would come close to ringing true to my experience would be if he’s playing with a few cards short of a full deck and way too many jokers — if he’s a mentally ill, pathologically delusional. IOW: a nut case.

    And if that’s the way you see the character, good luck. Needless to say, it’s a timely topic in light of the suicide of Robin WIlliams. Out of respect for Robin Williams and the two thousand people who commit suicide every day, please honor the soulful pathos of depression and suicide, be emotionally true to the suffering.

    Viewers may suspend disbelief for a story that strays from the facts. They will never suspend disbelief for a story that does not resonate with the emotional truth of what it means to be human.

    fwiw.

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2014In: Public

    Suicidal and desperate for death, a young man travels to a house to remove the one element in his life that keeps him going so he can have his death wish fulfilled, his brother.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 18, 2014 at 7:27 am

    Hmm. I have done more than a few suicide interventions, spent h-o-u-r-s listening to people pour out their hearts about depression, personal problems, why they can't go on living and their m.o.'s for terminating their existence. Frankly, the only way the character in this logline would come close toRead more

    Hmm. I have done more than a few suicide interventions, spent h-o-u-r-s listening to people pour out their hearts about depression, personal problems, why they can’t go on living and their m.o.’s for terminating their existence.

    Frankly, the only way the character in this logline would come close to ringing true to my experience would be if he’s playing with a few cards short of a full deck and way too many jokers — if he’s a mentally ill, pathologically delusional. IOW: a nut case.

    And if that’s the way you see the character, good luck. Needless to say, it’s a timely topic in light of the suicide of Robin WIlliams. Out of respect for Robin Williams and the two thousand people who commit suicide every day, please honor the soulful pathos of depression and suicide, be emotionally true to the suffering.

    Viewers may suspend disbelief for a story that strays from the facts. They will never suspend disbelief for a story that does not resonate with the emotional truth of what it means to be human.

    fwiw.

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  3. Posted: August 17, 2014In: Public

    Suicidal and desperate for death, a young man travels to a house to remove the one element in his life that keeps him going so he can have his death wish fulfilled, his brother.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 18, 2014 at 3:59 am

    So his goal is to kill his brother so he can kill himself? Why/how is his brother standing in the way of his self-destructive impulses?

    So his goal is to kill his brother so he can kill himself? Why/how is his brother standing in the way of his self-destructive impulses?

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