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  1. Posted: September 28, 2019In: Action

    Animal activists do a night raid on a facility only to discover human not animal unwilling test subjects. They are now trapped with a security force willing to kill them to protect the secret.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 29, 2019 at 3:21 am

    What about the human test subjects?? Shouldn't part of the objective goal be to rescue them?

    What about the human test subjects?? Shouldn’t part of the objective goal be to rescue them?

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  2. Posted: September 24, 2019In: Comedy

    After seeing one year ahead in a clairvoyant?s crystal ball and discovering he?s dead, a happy-go-lucky family man evaluates every part of his life in an attempt to prevent his demise.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 25, 2019 at 11:16 am

    I like your latest idea.? Suggest that if the lesson learned in Act 3 is to live in the present, then perhaps his contrasting problem in Act 1 might be that that he's always living for the future, striving for his Big Dream.? And he could be quite happy doing so because he's making steady progress tRead more

    I like your latest idea.? Suggest that if the lesson learned in Act 3 is to live in the present, then perhaps his contrasting problem in Act 1 might be that that he’s always living for the future, striving for his Big Dream.? And he could be quite happy doing so because he’s making steady progress toward his Biggest Dream.? Only needs 3-4 years to reach it. (Although to accomplish that Big Dream he’s postponing other things that turn out to be more important. like a loving relationship. marriage, a family,)

    And then he discovers he’s only got one year to live.? Which is a bummer in itself but it also means he’ll die without accomplishing his Big Dream. So what must he do?

    IOW:? if his objective goal is figure out a way not to die in one year, well, IMHO it’s better for the objective goal to not to be defined the word not. It should not be framed as a negative. So if he must not die in one year it’s so he can achieve something positive.? Which is…?

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  3. Posted: September 24, 2019In: Adventure

    Following the death of their beloved mentor, three warriors from rival kingdoms join forces to battle against a dying Prince who declares war upon his entire generation.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 25, 2019 at 9:09 am

    As mikepedley85 said. The death of the mentor may be a set back but it doesn't seem to qualify as the inciting incident.And what's the villain's motivation?And the villain has the strength and stamina to fight a genocidal war even though he's dying?And the warriors are from "rival kingdoms".? So areRead more

    As mikepedley85 said. The death of the mentor may be a set back but it doesn’t seem to qualify as the inciting incident.

    And what’s the villain’s motivation?

    And the villain has the strength and stamina to fight a genocidal war even though he’s dying?

    And the warriors are from “rival kingdoms”.? So are they outsiders to the kingdom of the evil Prince?? And if so what is their skin in the game?? Why MUST they put aside their rivalry and meddle in the internal affairs of another kingdom?

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