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(3rd revision) When a vigilante hacker maliciously deploys a power-hungry biotech corporation?s untested experimental software and discovers it capable of manipulating reality to their advantage, she must exploit the resulting bugs, to stop them, before the world is at their mercy.
What differentiates the story world of this story from the story world of "The Matrix"?Notice, I didn't say character, or plot or objective goal.? I said story world:? how is the story world not a knock off of "The Matrix"??? (Because I'm guessing that's is the inevitable comparison that comes to miRead more
What differentiates the story world of this story from the story world of “The Matrix”?
Notice, I didn’t say character, or plot or objective goal.? I said story world:? how is the story world not a knock off of “The Matrix”??? (Because I’m guessing that’s is the inevitable comparison that comes to mind, the unavoidable question that any movie maker will want to know up front.)? How is the BBC (Big Bad Corporation)? be able to manipulate reality on a global scale, bringing all people everywhere under its digital delusion?
What is the gimmick that creates the story world?
See lessAn ambitious blogger lands a legit writing gig with a large publishing firm the only problem is her first story , the subject is a wealthy philanthropist with a surprising secret. ?His associates grow nervous about the nosy news lady uncovering potentially damaging information regarding financial improprieties. With a deadline closing in she discovers there is a bounty on her head.
At 61 words, the logline needs to be trimmed down by at least 1/3.? It both tells more than a logline reader wants to know about the plot -- and less than a logline reader needs to know about the plot. The story hook is that, come to find out, there is a bounty on her head.? And I'm guessing that'sRead more
At 61 words, the logline needs to be trimmed down by at least 1/3.? It both tells more than a logline reader wants to know about the plot — and less than a logline reader needs to know about the plot.
The story hook is that, come to find out, there is a bounty on her head.? And I’m guessing that’s the midpoint reversal (MPR) Big Reveal. Well, then what must she do?? What becomes her objective goal?
Also “a surprising secret” is the game ball — and the logline hides it.? There are at least 10,001 surprising secrets in at least 10,001 movies.? What distinguishes the “surprising secret” in this story that makes it truly “surprising”, different from the others.? The logline doesn’t have to describe the secret in explicit detail, but a logline reader will want to be able to see the game ball, have a clear idea of what’s in play.
I suggest running this through the site logline gnerator.
See lessAnimal activists do a night raid on a facility only to discover human not animal unwilling test subjects. They are now trapped with a security force willing to kill them to protect the secret.
>>>Film the conditions and then release the animals that could be released. They aren?t going to release an animal that is incapable of fending for itself.Now I am confused..? I thought they discover humans, not animal, test subjects.>> >must escape a test facility while eluding muRead more
>>>Film the conditions and then release the animals that could be released. They aren?t going to release an animal that is incapable of fending for itself.
Now I am confused..? I thought they discover humans, not animal, test subjects.
>> >must escape a test facility while eluding murderous security after discover human test subject not animals.
Again, what about the human test subjects?? To not try to save them (as well as themselves) is morally repugnant; that won’t endear the audience to the main characters. On the contrary.
In “Aliens”, Ripley’s? fights to not only to save herself and the crew but the sole surviving colonist, the child Newt.? The risks she’s willing to take for the sake of the child amp up the audience’s emotional investment in the outcome.? The bonding relationship that develops between Ripley and Newt is the emotional core of the film.
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