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  1. Posted: August 8, 2014In: Public

    A terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on the partner who double-crossed him and killed his girlfriend.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 8, 2014 at 12:41 pm

    In the real world, I have yet to know of anyone with a diagnosis of "a week to live" who had the strength to even get out of bed, let alone get revenge. But if you've got some hocus-pocus for making it a credible premise, more power. Just saying.

    In the real world, I have yet to know of anyone with a diagnosis of “a week to live” who had the strength to even get out of bed, let alone get revenge. But if you’ve got some hocus-pocus for making it a credible premise, more power.

    Just saying.

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  2. Posted: August 8, 2014In: Public

    A terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on the partner who double-crossed him and killed his girlfriend.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 8, 2014 at 12:41 pm

    In the real world, I have yet to know of anyone with a diagnosis of "a week to live" who had the strength to even get out of bed, let alone get revenge. But if you've got some hocus-pocus for making it a credible premise, more power. Just saying.

    In the real world, I have yet to know of anyone with a diagnosis of “a week to live” who had the strength to even get out of bed, let alone get revenge. But if you’ve got some hocus-pocus for making it a credible premise, more power.

    Just saying.

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  3. Posted: August 8, 2014In: Public

    A terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on the partner who double-crossed him and killed his girlfriend.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 8, 2014 at 12:25 pm

    Yeah, but "on death's door" gives me the sense of a man too ill to effect revenge or anything else beside popping pills. Whereas "terminally ill" conveys to me the sense that the clock is ticking; he's under a death sentence to die soon, albeit at an unspecified date. He's healthy enough to begin wiRead more

    Yeah, but “on death’s door” gives me the sense of a man too ill to effect revenge or anything else beside popping pills. Whereas “terminally ill” conveys to me the sense that the clock is ticking; he’s under a death sentence to die soon, albeit at an unspecified date. He’s healthy enough to begin with but in a race against time.

    As with Walter White in “Breaking Bad”. His diagnosis constitutes a death sentence — but the date is uncertain and he’s initially healthy enough to carry out his plan to earn enough money for his family by cooking meth.

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