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A hipster quest for "transcendent" duck tacos is derailed when a failed chef turned health inspector closes the duck truck down.
>>>The pursuit of the tacos is the goal, Zen hipsters BUT the failed cook shuts down the duck taco truck. The major complication. Now what? WHO must do WHAT to get the truck back a-cookin'?
>>>The pursuit of the tacos is the goal, Zen hipsters
BUT the failed cook shuts down the duck taco truck. The major complication.
Now what? WHO must do WHAT to get the truck back a-cookin’?
See lessA selfless man journeys through love and loss when he attempts to break his brother out of prison.
Like MichaelHag said. "Love and loss" are subjective, ethereal. How do they translate to images of people, places, objects and events on screen? And what's the inciting incident? That is, why must he free his brother?
Like MichaelHag said. “Love and loss” are subjective, ethereal. How do they translate to images of people, places, objects and events on screen?
And what’s the inciting incident? That is, why must he free his brother?
See lessA carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.
Icebreed2006: I have come to have a totally different take of your story, it seems. But it's your story, so I know what else to say. Except suggest that you rewind the thread and review the basic building blocks of your logline. What is the inciting incident? (The party can be the scene of the incitRead more
Icebreed2006:
I have come to have a totally different take of your story, it seems. But it’s your story, so I know what else to say. Except suggest that you rewind the thread and review the basic building blocks of your logline.
What is the inciting incident? (The party can be the scene of the inciting incident, but I just don’t see how it can be the incident that triggers the rest of the plot.)
As a result of the inciting incident, what must the protagonist do — or else?
See lessIs there a ticking clock?
Is there a stakes character?