1. Posted: June 5, 2013In:

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

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    Tony Edward: Are you familiar with "The Moral Premise" by Stanley D. Williams?

    Tony Edward:
    Are you familiar with “The Moral Premise” by Stanley D. Williams?

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  2. Posted: June 5, 2013In:

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    dpg Singularity

    Tony: As usual, you raise some interesting issues. And I wish I had the time to respond in full. But I don't. So for now I will opine that I am not so sure the conventional formulation of the moral premise works for "Gladiator". I hope we can explore this further as time permits.

    Tony:

    As usual, you raise some interesting issues. And I wish I had the time to respond in full. But I don’t. So for now I will opine that I am not so sure the conventional formulation of the moral premise works for “Gladiator”. I hope we can explore this further as time permits.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2013In:

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    dpg Singularity

    You already have a fascinating character + an intriguing situation, a strong two-fer. Go for a three-fer? Well, the three-fer you posted is a not only longer, but a little awkward. And if it's a 'secret', my gut reaction is to save the reveal for the pitch. fwiw

    You already have a fascinating character + an intriguing situation, a strong two-fer. Go for a three-fer? Well, the three-fer you posted is a not only longer, but a little awkward. And if it’s a ‘secret’, my gut reaction is to save the reveal for the pitch.

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