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A young man wakes up in an alternate 2016 where the United Kingdom voted to remain in the European Union.
As the others have said.? And what's the funny?? What is the running joke?? And what are his stakes in the situation?? Was he rabid opponent or supporter of Brexit?
As the others have said.? And what’s the funny?? What is the running joke?? And what are his stakes in the situation?? Was he rabid opponent or supporter of Brexit?
See lessWhen one of the last historical music venues closes, in a diversely changing city, a young band must help bring the spirit of Go-Go music to the forefront.
I get it that a young band would have a passion for and would want to revive interest in Go-Go music.? But I don't understand why they "must".? That the diversity mix of a city is changing is not a problem, a dramatic crisis that demands a remedy -- it's urban life.?? So why does it matter whether GRead more
I get it that a young band would have a passion for and would want to revive interest in Go-Go music.? But I don’t understand why they “must”.? That the diversity mix of a city is changing is not a problem, a dramatic crisis that demands a remedy — it’s urban life.?? So why does it matter whether Go-Go is popular — or pass??? What are the stakes that an audience can identify with and buy into?
That said, while the logline has a specific inciting incident, an historical musical venue closes, it lacks a specific objective goal.? “Must help bring the spirit of Go-Go music to the forefront” is vague,? a generality.? What is their game plan, their specific objective goal for reviving interest in Go-Go music?
See lessIn order to clear her brother of a wrongful murder conviction, an unemployed single mother puts herself through high school, college and law school.
giannisgerogiou:The movie was based on an actual legal case in the state of Massachusetts.?? Kenny Waters was convicted of murder and given a life sentence in? 1983.? So she had the rest of his life to achieve her objective goal.? There was no ticking clock.It took his sister Betty 12 years to get hRead more
giannisgerogiou:
The movie was based on an actual legal case in the state of Massachusetts.?? Kenny Waters was convicted of murder and given a life sentence in? 1983.? So she had the rest of his life to achieve her objective goal.? There was no ticking clock.
It took his sister Betty 12 years to get her law degree so that she could represent him in court.? It took her 6 more years of challenges to the validity of DNA evidence used to convict him. (It was not a matter of corrupt cops so much as incompetent ones.)? He was finally released in 2001 — 18 years after being wrongly convicted.
The main conflict is her battle against the local law enforcement agency and in the courts to prove her brother was innocent — that’s her objective goal.? Getting the necessary education was the means to achieving that goal.
I didn’t see the need to add “in order to represent him in court”.? It’s obvious, goes without saying.? (Why else would she want to get a law degree?) So it need not be said in a logline.
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