1. Posted: October 26, 2020In:

    After watching his girlfriend struggle with an abusive work environment and her self-esteem coming to shreds over a period of time, an unemployed man who feels indebted to her sets out to confront everyone who mistreats her. Things take a turn when all these people start showing up dead and she becomes the prime suspect of the killings.

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    As Richiev said. Who is the main character, who owns the spotlight of the story? Who is in the driver's seat of the plot? The man or the woman?

    As Richiev said.

    Who is the main character, who owns the spotlight of the story? Who is in the driver’s seat of the plot? The man or the woman?

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  2. Posted: October 27, 2020In:

    Humanity huddles on the Ring, desperate to survive; cascades of genetic changes have altered the very nature of the Earth and everything that still lives upon it. What will you do when you discover this is all according to plan?

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    What will the *main character* do in the situation? That is a question the logline should answer, not pose.

    What will the *main character* do in the situation? That is a question the logline should answer, not pose.

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  3. Posted: October 26, 2020In:

    When two reckless young women witness a drug deal involving a well-respected social media star, they must expose the celebrity before they are killed.

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    How will exposing the celebrity save their lives? Won't that incentivize the celebrity to kill them?

    How will exposing the celebrity save their lives? Won’t that incentivize the celebrity to kill them?

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