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A self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.
I don't find any salient fault with the logline. But neither do I find any salient feature. A unique take, an interesting twist such as what SSalvatore asked about, the adversaries fall in love. Or it pits the woman against her own father. The logline describes the steak -- but it doesn't have any sRead more
I don’t find any salient fault with the logline. But neither do I find any salient feature. A unique take, an interesting twist such as what SSalvatore asked about, the adversaries fall in love. Or it pits the woman against her own father.
The logline describes the steak — but it doesn’t have any sizzle. And loglines are more about selling the sizzle than describing the steak.
See lessA mild mannered insurance salesman living in the universe where all action movies takes place gets tired of action heros always crashing everything and wants to make them answer for their latest transgression, without being drawn into the action himself.
Yes, make it personal.
Yes, make it personal.
See lessWhen AI modelling is able to generate an image of someone’s ‘perfect match’ by scanning their brain, a married man must decide whether to secretly pursue a real-life woman that was mistakenly identified as his match by a social media algorithm when he shared his match image (Black Mirror Spec).
P.S. That the algorithm is buggy is an interesting plot twist, but I suggest it need not be included in the logline. Loglines need not give away the Big Plot Twist and should never reveal a spoiler. IMHO, the concept of match making by brain scans is strong enough to attract eyeballs and interest. fRead more
P.S. That the algorithm is buggy is an interesting plot twist, but I suggest it need not be included in the logline. Loglines need not give away the Big Plot Twist and should never reveal a spoiler. IMHO, the concept of match making by brain scans is strong enough to attract eyeballs and interest.
fwiw
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