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  1. Posted: May 18, 2019In: Family

    ? A hypochondriac TV host on the brink of failure must confront his troubled past when the only way to save his show is to go on a road trip with his estranged biological sister to find their birth mother.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 19, 2019 at 4:28 am

    Bibi:Thanks for the clarifications.Pumping up the ratings is a selfish act. Saving his sister isn't.? So why doesn't he donate a kidney? It's a can't-lose, three-for-one winner. 1] It saves her life; 2] It would end their estrangement; 3] It would boost ratings (arguably more so than finding his birRead more

    Bibi:

    Thanks for the clarifications.

    Pumping up the ratings is a selfish act. Saving his sister isn’t.? So why doesn’t he donate a kidney? It’s a can’t-lose, three-for-one winner. 1] It saves her life; 2] It would end their estrangement; 3] It would boost ratings (arguably more so than finding his birth mom).

    How will finding his birth mom save his sister? It seems like a separate goal. What is the primary objective goal that drives the plot?

    >>>The audience cares cause the main character cares
    and because the protagonist cares for something that’s worth caring about. Saving his sister is worth caring about. Pumping up his ratings, not so much.

    >>> the producers of his show want him to do a reality tv show about his own estranged family coming together and reuniting.
    Well, then, it’s the producers’ goal — he doesn’t own it. It’s better if the protagonist owns his objective goal, particularly if he undertakes it in spite of what others say, not because of it.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2019In: Family

    ? A hypochondriac TV host on the brink of failure must confront his troubled past when the only way to save his show is to go on a road trip with his estranged biological sister to find their birth mother.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 19, 2019 at 2:20 am

    I don't see the logical cause-and-effect chain between his floundering TV show and the quest. Why is the success of his TV show contingent on his finding his birth mother?? ? Why must his biological sister accompany him? And how does his hypochondria into? it?? And why should an audience want to carRead more

    I don’t see the logical cause-and-effect chain between his floundering TV show and the quest. Why is the success of his TV show contingent on his finding his birth mother?? ? Why must his biological sister accompany him? And how does his hypochondria into? it?? And why should an audience want to care whether his TV show succeeds or fails?

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2019In: War

    An Army flight medic risks his own life day in and day out while desperately trying to save the lives of injured soldiers and civilians in Iraq.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 19, 2019 at 2:16 am

    Is this a concept for a feature film or a video? series?

    Is this a concept for a feature film or a video? series?

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