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After blowing his investor?s money in one drunken night, a socially awkward college student struggles to produce a movie with no budget or risk being found out.
I see no reason why it can't be a self-inflicted inciting incident as a result of a character flaw.?As an example, I would cite the inciting incident for "Lost in America".? ?A wife loses all of her husband's retirement savings in one all-night binge of gambling in Las Vegas.? She impulsively succumRead more
I see no reason why it can’t be a self-inflicted inciting incident as a result of a character flaw.?
As an example, I would cite the inciting incident for “Lost in America”.? ?A wife loses all of her husband’s retirement savings in one all-night binge of gambling in Las Vegas.? She impulsively succumbs to a temptation she has never had before.
See lessAfter blowing his investor?s money in one drunken night, a socially awkward college student struggles to produce a movie with no budget or risk being found out.
If you? splice both acts together, what is the overarching, singular objective goal that unifies the plot?? Right now , it seems to me you've got a two plot concept:? one for before the film is made, another one for after.
If you? splice both acts together, what is the overarching, singular objective goal that unifies the plot?? Right now , it seems to me you’ve got a two plot concept:? one for before the film is made, another one for after.
See lessAfter blowing his investor?s money in one drunken night, a socially awkward college student struggles to produce a movie with no budget or risk being found out.
I was hooked on the? logline you posted, unhooked by the additional story act you appended.?Why?? Because stories about people who enjoy wild success in show business only to succumb to the siren songs of sex and drugs are a dime a dozen.? It's so over-used,? so unoriginal, a cliche plot.I suggest tRead more
I was hooked on the? logline you posted, unhooked by the additional story act you appended.?
Why?? Because stories about people who enjoy wild success in show business only to succumb to the siren songs of sex and drugs are a dime a dozen.? It’s so over-used,? so unoriginal, a cliche plot.
I suggest the story in the logline as posted? is the more interesting story and the one you ought to focus on and flesh out.
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