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  1. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Drama

    An alcoholic soldier must face his abusive father and confront his own addictions before he loses his memory.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 30, 2019 at 2:02 am

    >>> has to complete one last mission as part of his final redemption?keeping a promiseThen his objective goal is to fulfill the promise. What is the promise he made? Whatever it is, that is what needs to be incorporated into the logline.All the other issues you mentioned are complications tRead more

    >>> has to complete one last mission as part of his final redemption?keeping a promise

    Then his objective goal is to fulfill the promise. What is the promise he made? Whatever it is, that is what needs to be incorporated into the logline.

    All the other issues you mentioned are complications to fulfilling that promise, problems to be overcome on the way. Like regaining sobriety. Overcoming alcoholism is not his end game, it’s a necessary step in his dramatic game plan to being able to fulfill his promise.

    And there are some studies to indicate that lithium is implicated in memory impairment — but that is not the same as total memory loss.? ?And? to clarify, lithium as a remedy for PTSD is prescribed — it is not mandatory.? He cannot be compelled to take it against his volition. That’s a violation of the medical code of ethics.

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  2. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Drama

    An alcoholic soldier must face his abusive father and confront his own addictions before he loses his memory.

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    Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 1:36 pm

    >>overcome a family history of alcohol addiction and patriarchal abuse Film is a visual medium. What's does "overcome" or "redress" or "redemption" look like? What's happens in the scene that let's the audience know he's overcome and redressed his addiction and abuse, that he's redeemed himselRead more

    >>overcome a family history of alcohol addiction and patriarchal abuse

    Film is a visual medium. What’s does “overcome” or “redress” or “redemption” look like? What’s happens in the scene that let’s the audience know he’s overcome and redressed his addiction and abuse, that he’s redeemed himself?

    And find answers to what questions?

    >>> Memory loss comes from lithium treatments for PTSD
    Is it medically valid that lithium causes memory loss?

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  3. Posted: April 29, 2019In: Thriller

    When an idealistic attorney discovers the man she freed from prison is a cold-blooded killer she chooses payback over ethics and mounts a stunning plan to put him back inside.

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    Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 1:23 pm

    I like the set up, that she discovers her idealism has been betrayed, that she's freed a man guilty of a vicious crime.? What would complete the logline is a more specific statement of her game plan , the course of action she will take to put him behind bars.

    I like the set up, that she discovers her idealism has been betrayed, that she’s freed a man guilty of a vicious crime.? What would complete the logline is a more specific statement of her game plan , the course of action she will take to put him behind bars.

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