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In 1977, a reformed ex-con, desperate to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, returns to his old life of drug dealing but soon learns the game has changed and the players are more ruthless than before.
Okay... but what's the story hook?? What makes this story different from -- rather than like -- "Light Sleeper", "Carlito's Way",? and "Breaking Bad"?? What is so compelling about the character and his conflict that's will grab and hold viewer's eyeballs episode after episode?
Okay… but what’s the story hook?? What makes this story different from — rather than like — “Light Sleeper”, “Carlito’s Way”,? and “Breaking Bad”?? What is so compelling about the character and his conflict that’s will grab and hold viewer’s eyeballs episode after episode?
See lessA reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems with a woman who offers him stability, returns to his former psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman for whom he might still be madly in love with.
>>>whom he might still be madly in love with. Maybe? he's trapped in the snares of the classic midlife, Jungian anima complex. Anyway, my initial impression of him is that's he's a schmuck, a loser. (And 1st impressions are everything in loglines because you get only one chance, a few seconRead more
>>>whom he might still be madly in love with.
Maybe? he’s trapped in the snares of the classic midlife, Jungian anima complex.
Anyway, my initial impression of him is that’s he’s a schmuck, a loser. (And 1st impressions are everything in loglines because you get only one chance, a few seconds, to sell the concept.)
I find the? shrink? to be a more interesting character.? She’s a winner who dominates men through manipulation.? So why not refit the story around her?
See lessIn early 20th century Nepal, a man-slaying tiger, rumored to be demonic, torments a rural village. After several unsuccessful attempts to capture or kill the tiger, the villagers illicit help from famed hunter, James Adley, who claims he has the perfect bait.
Is this based upon an actual historical incident?? If so, I suggest the more appropriate genre is historical.? If it's fiction, then drop the name of the protagonist -- for the purposes of a logline, his name is extraneous.
Is this based upon an actual historical incident?? If so, I suggest the more appropriate genre is historical.? If it’s fiction, then drop the name of the protagonist — for the purposes of a logline, his name is extraneous.
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