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HIDDEN FIGURES: When a black female mathematician in the 1960?s gets the opportunity to join the all white male NASA team, she must fight the racial abuse in order to solve getting a man back from the moon before the Russians do.
The title is "Hidden Figures "-- it's an ensemble story about 3 Black women, not just one.>>>must fight the racial abuseThe women had to? fight racial discrimination.? They were not the victims of overt racial abuse at NASA so much as the victim of ongoing discrimination, petty and not so pRead more
The title is “Hidden Figures “– it’s an ensemble story about 3 Black women, not just one.
>>>must fight the racial abuse
The women had to? fight racial discrimination.? They were not the victims of overt racial abuse at NASA so much as the victim of ongoing discrimination, petty and not so petty slights and indignities.? ?They were the victims of not just racism but sexism .? In the White, macho male culture of NASA, they got no respect for their intelligence because they was both Black and female.
>>>to solve getting a man back from the moon before the Russians do
Rather, the objective goal in the time frame of the? film is to do the mathematical calculations necessary to enable the first American astronaut to orbit the earth.? The moon missions came much later, after the FADE OUT and CREDIT SCROLL.
So, maybe something like:
See lessThe true story of three Black, female engineers who struggled against racism and sexism in NASA to enable the first American to orbit the earth.
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When the woman of his dreams is kidnapped by a mysterious figure, a manic-depressive alcoholic alters his entire life trajectory to save her from an ethereal shape-shifter that harvests souls for energy.
AnkhEnergy: You've obviously put a lot of thought and imagination into your story.? I've said my 2.5 cents worth on the psychopathology and will leave it at that. One final thought: you're synopsis discloses information I was totally unaware of, could have never gleaned from the logline.? InformatioRead more
AnkhEnergy:
You’ve obviously put a lot of thought and imagination into your story.? I’ve said my 2.5 cents worth on the psychopathology and will leave it at that.
One final thought: you’re synopsis discloses information I was totally unaware of, could have never gleaned from the logline.? Information that frames your story in a different light.? Specifically, that your story is? specific setting as to country (Brazil) and culture (African).? I suggest this is need-to-know information that needs to be? concisely included in the logline because it’s your story hook.
In my book,? the most important factor in a logline, the must-have ingredient,? is the story hook,? an interest grabber that distinguishes,? differentiates a story from other stories with similar generic plot lines.? In this case,? from other plots about flawed a protagonist needing to rescue a damsel in distress from a malevolent entity.
Regards and best wishes with your writing.
See lessWhen the daughter of an ex-CIA agent is kidnapped by human traffickers, he must hunt them down and save her before she gets sold as a sex slave. ? Taken
Is this an "Example"? logline for the film "Taken"?
Is this an “Example”? logline for the film “Taken”?
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