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When a bookshop goes bankrupt, life is thrown into uncertainty for those who call it home. ‘D’ is eager to win a chance to launch her music career and finally escape her crippling double life. ‘B’ has a fatal secret she keeps from her surrogate children and sets out on a personal quest. While ‘W’ just lets life pass him by as he’s forced to come to grips with his sexuality and the prospect of his father never coming back for him.
This logline presents a scenario with three protagonists in three story threads running in tandem.? The standard logline formula doesn't apply.What is needed is a logline that ties the story threads together, a unifying theme, dramatic problem, objective goal.? Right now, I don't see what the unifyiRead more
This logline presents a scenario with three protagonists in three story threads running in tandem.? The standard logline formula doesn’t apply.
What is needed is a logline that ties the story threads together, a unifying theme, dramatic problem, objective goal.? Right now, I don’t see what the unifying factor is other than that they all worked at the same place — but that only applies to the 1st Act.? After that, the characters and their action lines seem to scatter to the wind.
What is the unifying? factor that ties story threads together for the rest of the film?
See lessWhen a bookshop goes bankrupt, life is thrown into uncertainty for those who call it home. ‘D’ is eager to win a chance to launch her music career and finally escape her crippling double life. ‘B’ has a fatal secret she keeps from her surrogate children and sets out on a personal quest. While ‘W’ just lets life pass him by as he’s forced to come to grips with his sexuality and the prospect of his father never coming back for him.
It's fairly SOP in drama that characters have to confront their futures as well as their past.? What's so different about that confrontation in this story? IOW:? what's the story hook?
It’s fairly SOP in drama that characters have to confront their futures as well as their past.? What’s so different about that confrontation in this story? IOW:? what’s the story hook?
See lessAfter building a machine that can see the future, a young inventor and his friend use it to get rich, only to run afoul of gangsters.
As Adam Bernstr?m said.? ? Stories involving time travel or prescience run into logical conundrums that the logic of the story has to account for. If they can see into the future, then shouldn't they have seen the problem with the gangsters coming and adapted their. m.o. to obviate the complication?
As Adam Bernstr?m said.? ? Stories involving time travel or prescience run into logical conundrums that the logic of the story has to account for.
If they can see into the future, then shouldn’t they have seen the problem with the gangsters coming and adapted their. m.o. to obviate the complication?
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