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When his kinky girlfriend is apprehended by bounty hunters, a rich playboy is forced to team up with a hot-headed southern belle, as they delve into the seedy world of LA?s high-class S&M society, hoping to uncover clues to her whereabouts.
As Richiev said.? ?If there's a bounty on her head, then there's no mystery where she is; she will have been booked into the Sybil Brand facility for women in the L.A. County jail system pending her trial.? ?If there's a contract on her head put there by a gangster, then who knows where she is.A bouRead more
As Richiev said.? ?If there’s a bounty on her head, then there’s no mystery where she is; she will have been booked into the Sybil Brand facility for women in the L.A. County jail system pending her trial.? ?If there’s a contract on her head put there by a gangster, then who knows where she is.
A bounty is legal; a contract is extra-legal.? Which one applies?
See lessAfter the death of his wife, a control freak juggles raising his 2 year old son, managing his successful business, and protecting his friendship with his best friend who moves in to help.
Isn't the? death of his wife the inciting incident?? The friend moving in seems to be an consequential complication. BTW, is the friend male or female?
Isn’t the? death of his wife the inciting incident?? The friend moving in seems to be an consequential complication.
BTW, is the friend male or female?
See lessWhen his kinky girlfriend is apprehended by bounty hunters, a rich playboy is forced to team up with a hot-headed southern belle, as they delve into the seedy world of LA?s high-class S&M society, hoping to uncover clues to her whereabouts.
Mikepedley85: Pretty good rewrite and in 28 words versus 41 words in the original. Alanhyde: We often ask questions the answers to which we know will not be in the logline.? We ask them because the logline raises questions when it should only raise curiosity in reading the script.? When a? logline?Read more
Mikepedley85:
Pretty good rewrite and in 28 words versus 41 words in the original.
Alanhyde:
We often ask questions the answers to which we know will not be in the logline.? We ask them because the logline raises questions when it should only raise curiosity in reading the script.? When a? logline? doesn’t seem to? convey a concise (41 words is too long for a logline) and clear statement what the plot is about.
fwiw
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