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A remand prisoner is re-routed to a temp facility where she must play ball with her vile cellmate in order to identify her own unwitting connection to the terror attack that diverted her.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot but does not follow through with a complete plot.? Further, if the prisoner is in the role of the protagonist she is presented as a helpless victim of the situation, more acted upon against her volition that acting of her own volition.A protagonist should bRead more
The logline sets up a situation for a plot but does not follow through with a complete plot.? Further, if the prisoner is in the role of the protagonist she is presented as a helpless victim of the situation, more acted upon against her volition that acting of her own volition.
A protagonist should be in the driver’s seat of the plot.? If, as in this case, she involuntarily finds herself in the passenger seat in a (dramatic) vehicle, she must find a way to get into the driver’s seat.? She must find a way to subvert the objective goal of her adversary (“to identify her own unwitting connection” — whatever that means) with her own objective goal.
So upon finding herself in this circumstance, what becomes her objective goal?? ?The logline should be framed in terms of her objective goal — not that of her captors.
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Is this for a series or for a feature film?
Is this for a series or for a feature film?
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I can see this working as a character study into the true believer mindset.? Which may be a hard sell depending on how credible the character comes across.? But I'm still unclear as to the setup and inciting incident.
I can see this working as a character study into the true believer mindset.? Which may be a hard sell depending on how credible the character comes across.? But I’m still unclear as to the setup and inciting incident.
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