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When a British Agent is accused of aiding the terrorist attack she failed to foil, she is forced to go on the run from, and on the hunt for, both friends and foes.
My tweak: When a British agent is accused of aiding a terrorist attack she failed to foil, she must prove her innocence while on the run from coworkers and conspirators. (28 words)Notes: My tweak explicitly includes her objective goal, what she must do while on the lam. I have no problem with the inRead more
My tweak:
When a British agent is accused of aiding a terrorist attack she failed to foil, she must prove her innocence while on the run from coworkers and conspirators.
(28 words)
Notes:
My tweak explicitly includes her objective goal, what she must do while on the lam.
I have no problem with the inciting incident being the accusation.? That’s when the action of the plot proper begins? Until she’s accused she has no need to run, no need to prove her innocence.? Everything else before that event is setup.
I? used “coworkers” instead of friends because aren’t her erstwhile friends now her foes?? But that’s picky, optional.
And “conspirators” to preserve the alliteration.? But again, that’s picky, optional.
fwiw
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>>>he must attempt to maintain control despite being coercedI'm confused.? Is he being coerced or manipulated?? And if the former, who is coercing him?
>>>he must attempt to maintain control despite being coerced
I’m confused.? Is he being coerced or manipulated?? And if the former, who is coercing him?
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Tony Edward: I am attracted to the? story because: 1]I want to see how he pulls it off without getting caught.? It essentially becomes a heist flick, does it not? 2] I want to see the character arc, how circumstances provide an opportunity for a nice guy, a heretofore compliant, law-abiding milquetoRead more
Tony Edward:
I am attracted to the? story because:
1]I want to see how he pulls it off without getting caught.? It essentially becomes a heist flick, does it not?
2] I want to see the character arc, how circumstances provide an opportunity for a nice guy, a heretofore compliant, law-abiding milquetoast, to unleash his repressed shadow .
As for moral justification, what’s the moral justification for Danny Ocean ripping off the treasure vault of 3 Las Vegas casinos?? ?There really isn’t.? The? audience buys into the character and the heist on the basis of emotional factors.? So sell the emotional justification, not the moral.
Regards and best wishes with this story.
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