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  1. Posted: April 23, 2018In: Fantasy

    After trying an anti aging cream, a 71 year old starts getting younger every morning and must seek its manufacturer to avoid dying…

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 23, 2018 at 9:53 pm

    variable:Come to think about it, I think it's a potentially cool concept.? It would be another story working off the primal wish of getting a 2nd chance to live one's life over,? to right the wrongs, to make better decisions.? And I would suggest her biological time clock should age -- or rather youRead more

    variable:

    Come to think about it, I think it’s a potentially cool concept.? It would be another story working off the primal wish of getting a 2nd chance to live one’s life over,? to right the wrongs, to make better decisions.? And I would suggest her biological time clock should age — or rather youth — backwards one day at a time.? However, the world doesn’t.? It keeps moving forward in time.? Which presents interesting choices she has to make.

    But I fear that the 1st reaction of most movie makers will be what mine was, “Oh,? that was already done with ‘Benjamin Button’.” So I think the logline (as well as the script) needs not only a different inciting incident (which you’ve got ) but a more interesting objective goal than finding the manufacturer.? I think her objective goal should be to seize the opportunity to live the life she always wanted to live but didn’t have the guts to live.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: April 23, 2018In: Fantasy

    After trying an anti aging cream, a 71 year old starts getting younger every morning and must seek its manufacturer to avoid dying…

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 23, 2018 at 6:05 am

    Seems like a clone of the premise? for?"The Curious Case of Benjamin Button"? (2008).? Different story bootup (inciting incident) , but same dramatic problem, a character who lives his life backwards.

    Seems like a clone of the premise? for?”The Curious Case of Benjamin Button”? (2008).? Different story bootup (inciting incident) , but same dramatic problem, a character who lives his life backwards.

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  3. Posted: April 21, 2018In: Comedy

    When his uncle and Stepfather want a new council building, the council lawyer to impress his Mafia uncle and take over his uncle?s mafia empire , introduces parking fines but he must deal with an irate customer and his computing hacking stepbrother who by interfering with his plans threatens to make him look incompetent.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 23, 2018 at 1:13 am

    >>>introduces parking fines but he must dealAs the municipal council lawyer, he can only recommend.? The majority of the council has to approve.And parking fines are small potatoes, pocket change? when compared to the money his uncle must be racking in by the regular rackets.? Even as a comRead more

    >>>introduces parking fines but he must deal

    As the municipal council lawyer, he can only recommend.? The majority of the council has to approve.

    And parking fines are small potatoes, pocket change? when compared to the money his uncle must be racking in by the regular rackets.? Even as a comedy, I fail to see how this is enough to impress his uncle,? tap him as his successor.

    And isn’t it an “irate citizen”? rather than “irate customer”?

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