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  1. Posted: April 10, 2018In: Crime

    After a rape victim loses in court from the suspect?s influential family, she emerges as the leader of “broken”, a group of similar cases prepared to bring justice by necessary evil

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 11, 2018 at 6:17 am

    >>>they bring justice by mutilating the rapists who escaped the law>>>bring justice by necessary evilHow?? By (gulp) severing the rapist's pride and joy??(Poetic-street justice?)

    >>>they bring justice by mutilating the rapists who escaped the law
    >>>bring justice by necessary evil

    How?? By (gulp) severing the rapist’s pride and joy??
    (Poetic-street justice?)

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  2. Posted: April 10, 2018In: Romance

    After a handsome ?younger? man of 74 unexpectedly falls for her at their ?wheelchairs only? assisted living center, a bitter, 93-year-old divorcee must battle her own distrust of men, before accepting love and working to thwart the competition.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 11, 2018 at 1:17 am

    >>>you don?t have anything to say about their age...I don't see a problem.? Instead I see a cornucopia spilling over with dramatic opportunities.For one thing, there will be no lack of elderly actors who would be interested in the roles.? ?Eager to participate because there are so few opporRead more

    >>>you don?t have anything to say about their age…

    I don’t see a problem.? Instead I see a cornucopia spilling over with dramatic opportunities.

    For one thing, there will be no lack of elderly actors who would be interested in the roles.? ?Eager to participate because there are so few opportunities for them to play major characters.

    To be sure, the love that develops will be more mature, not intoxicating, not hyper-stimulated by the usual suspect hormones that the brains of teens and young adults are saturated with.? But what it lacks in intensity is more than compensated for by depth and breadth, and seasoned by wisdom.? (And I trust the writer discerns this.)

    Or as the poet William Butler Yeats put it:

    Through all the lying days of my youth
    I swayed my leaves and flowers in the sun;
    Now I wither into the truth.

    All the screenwriting gurus talk about the need for characters to arc to? a “lesson learned” to an “emotional truth”.? These two people have “withered” into wheel chairs.? And in the process they have matured/ripened to comprehend and express the ultimate truth about their lives, about all our lives.

    >>>They are more interested in seeking love from their family (particularly grand-kids) rather than seeking a new encounter

    But what if their kids have dumped them , warehoused them in rest homes until they die?? And rarely visit and get out after putting in their token time?

    And here’s another major obstacle/ complication to fold into the story:? when the heirs to the woman’s estate find out about the romance, they try to sabotage it because of the legal implications.? ?To wit,? they won’t get their full share of her estate.? Or any at all if there is no pre-nuptial agreement or if she writes him into her will and her kids and grandkids out.

    There’s enough conflict right there to fill out the entire 3rd act.

    This is a story well worth telling.? A script that that??must?to be written.

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  3. Posted: April 10, 2018In: Romance

    After a handsome ?younger? man of 74 unexpectedly falls for her at their ?wheelchairs only? assisted living center, a bitter, 93-year-old divorcee must battle her own distrust of men, before accepting love and working to thwart the competition.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 10, 2018 at 10:10 pm

    I think this has the makings for a wonderful story.However:? the standard formula is to embody the objective goal and subjective problem in a singular protagonist.? ?But in this story it's the man who has the objective goal? and? the woman who has the subjective problem.I have come to the conclusionRead more

    I think this has the makings for a wonderful story.

    However:? the standard formula is to embody the objective goal and subjective problem in a singular protagonist.? ?But in this story it’s the man who has the objective goal? and? the woman who has the subjective problem.

    I have come to the conclusion that is okay when the spine of the plot is the working out of a relationship. In effect, relationship plots? such as this one have dual protagonists.? So why not divide up the objective goal and subjective problem between them?

    But I do think that in loglines for relationship plots, it is better to frame the story in terms of the character who embodies the objective goal.? For one thing, the character with the objective goal provides the inciting incident that sets the plot in motion.? Which is certainly the case here.? If he doesn’t take a fancy to her, nothing happens; there is no plot.? ?He is the proactive character — she is the reactive, resisting one.? So I think the love story should be framed in terms of the character who is proactive, who makes the 1st move.

    fwiw

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