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A married woman, riddled with guilt, starts over in a tiny village, but making it her home gets even tougher when she discovers she’s falling for the vicar.
Among other things, a logline is sales tool, a form of a sales pitch.? And a key element in a persuasive sales pitch is story differentiation, highlighting some element that makes the story unique, makes it stand out from similar competing stories.Adultery, or the temptation to engage, is a fairly cRead more
Among other things, a logline is sales tool, a form of a sales pitch.? And a key element in a persuasive sales pitch is story differentiation, highlighting some element that makes the story unique, makes it stand out from similar competing stories.
Adultery, or the temptation to engage, is a fairly common dramatic predicament.? What do you conceive as your story hook, the element that makes this story stand out from the others?
See lessTouched by his family’s grief, a deceased, self-centred college graduate has three days until his funeral to show his family how much they mean to him too so he can have peace in the afterlife.
What's supposed to be the story hook?And what's the underlying theme you are exploring?? Theme is not an element that should be explicit in a logline, but the dialectic of the plot should suggest a theme being explored, one that will emerge in due course.? And I'm curious as to what you conceive theRead more
What’s supposed to be the story hook?
And what’s the underlying theme you are exploring?? Theme is not an element that should be explicit in a logline, but the dialectic of the plot should suggest a theme being explored, one that will emerge in due course.? And I’m curious as to what you conceive the theme for this story to be.
And? isn’t “so he can have peace in the afterlife” a selfish motive?? Shouldn’t his motive be to give his family peace of mind?
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I am unable to untangle what the story is about, what the plot is.Suffice it to say in regards to: >>>struggles to learnLoglines are about what a protagonist struggles to DO (objective goal) -- not about what she must learn (subjective issue).
I am unable to untangle what the story is about, what the plot is.
Suffice it to say in regards to:
>>>struggles to learn
Loglines are about what a protagonist struggles to DO (objective goal) — not about what she must learn (subjective issue).
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