1. Posted: March 14, 2018In:

    Judgement Day

    dpg Singularity

    As the others have said.And >>> to stop an apocalyptic showdown between his Antichrist son and Jesus.Obviously they have to fail.? Because the showdown is the one scene the audience would really want to see.? It's the Obligatory Scene and to not deliver it would be anti-climactic, a real buRead more

    As the others have said.

    And
    >>> to stop an apocalyptic showdown between his Antichrist son and Jesus.

    Obviously they have to fail.? Because the showdown is the one scene the audience would really want to see.? It’s the Obligatory Scene and to not deliver it would be anti-climactic, a real bummer.

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  2. Posted: March 13, 2018In:

    Amid a sweltering summer, five different souls first encounter adulthood as gentrification alters their community.

    dpg Singularity

    >>>"encounters fist time adulthood" Coming of age stories almost always entail the protagonist being besotted by a? love interest. In this case in keeping with the theme, it ought to be of the star-crossed variety:? a major complication is that she's the daughter of a very affluent family wRead more

    >>>”encounters fist time adulthood”

    Coming of age stories almost always entail the protagonist being besotted by a? love interest. In this case in keeping with the theme, it ought to be of the star-crossed variety:? a major complication is that she’s the daughter of a very affluent family who are prime movers in the gentrification of the neighborhood.

    His greatest love is sprung from his greatest hate.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2018In:

    After a lovesick flight attendant and the wife of a doppelganger of a famous actor becomes pregnant by him, he sets out to convince them to share a home with him.

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    dpg Singularity

    This version is a more interesting concept of a marital triangle.? However, now it's not clear to me who the protagonist is, the stewardess or the husband.? ?Frankly,? it seems to me that this version makes the the husband the central character.? He's the one who drives the story, who creates the ceRead more

    This version is a more interesting concept of a marital triangle.? However, now it’s not clear to me who the protagonist is, the stewardess or the husband.? ?Frankly,? it seems to me that this version makes the the husband the central character.? He’s the one who drives the story, who creates the central dramatic dilemma by suggesting a co-living arrangement.? He’s the one with an objective goal: to have a living arrangement convenient for him.

    And he is certainly the most interesting of the three.

    So who is the protagonist?? And what is the story really about?? What theme are you trying to explore?

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