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  1. Posted: January 11, 2018In: Fantasy

    A bounty hunter and a renegade race against the power-hungry to find an utopia lost in time.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 11, 2018 at 11:02 pm

    If you do meld the two characters into one, why not cast the bounty hunter as a woman?

    If you do meld the two characters into one, why not cast the bounty hunter as a woman?

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  2. Posted: January 11, 2018In: Thriller

    After getting an unusual feedback in his survey, an editor in chief gets involved with the underground network of renegade AI

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 11, 2018 at 10:58 pm

    As Richiev said.? And the inciting incident seems rather weak, vague.? What is so unusual about "unusual" that upends his status quo and motivates him to pursue his objective goal? And what's at stake?? What does the protagonist stand to gain is he succeeds, or lose if he fails?

    As Richiev said.? And the inciting incident seems rather weak, vague.? What is so unusual about “unusual” that upends his status quo and motivates him to pursue his objective goal?

    And what’s at stake?? What does the protagonist stand to gain is he succeeds, or lose if he fails?

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2018In: Fantasy

    A bounty hunter and a renegade race against the power-hungry to find an utopia lost in time.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 11, 2018 at 12:17 pm

    Libari:Thanks for the clarification.>>> For the renegade, clearing her name and not letting someone take power beforehand and do what they like, which would tarnish her motivation. For the bounty hunter; his motive eventually changes from riches to needing companionship above all else.ThatRead more

    Libari:

    Thanks for the clarification.

    >>> For the renegade, clearing her name and not letting someone take power beforehand and do what they like, which would tarnish her motivation. For the bounty hunter; his motive eventually changes from riches to needing companionship above all else.

    That describes WHY they pursue the objective goal–their motivations.? But the inciting incident, the call to action, is about the WHAT, not the why.? The call to action is a specific event (external to the characters) that sets up the plot, that causes them to pursue the objective goal of the plot

    For example,? in the? movie “Wonder Woman”, the inciting incident that triggers all the action? of the plot is the British pilot crashing onto the island where the Amazons reside.

    What is the specific event that upsets their status quo, pivots their lives in a new direction and causes them to pursue the objective goal.?

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