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A feisty female weretiger who just wants to hunt in peace, discovers a werecat trapped beneath the city, while realising that she is in love with her best friend Sally, as they team up with and unlikely ally to save the world from destruction.
She just wants to hunt in ?peace... and then she's gotta save the world from destruction? What is the inciting incident and ?what is the threat that it creates her that requires her to save the world? ?In the previous iteration ?you said describe the threat in terms of "an ancient hidden secret". ?TRead more
She just wants to hunt in ?peace… and then she’s gotta save the world from destruction? What is the inciting incident and ?what is the threat that it creates her that requires her to save the world? ?In the previous iteration ?you said describe the threat in terms of “an ancient hidden secret”. ?That’s hiding the game ball. ?The logline needs to reveal it.
See lessWhen an orphaned dropout joins an off-grid commune to evade a hometown scandal, but secretly returns to claim an inheritance, he must fight off reporters and protestors who follow him and destroy his commune, which he must rebuild with his windfall.
Why does he want to rebuild the commune?He fled to it to escape public scrutiny, attention. ?That was his original intent, right? And then he got it anyway and the commune was destroyed in the process.So the commune no longer serves his original purpose. What is motivating him now to want to rebuildRead more
Why does he want to rebuild the commune?
He fled to it to escape public scrutiny, attention. ?That was his original intent, right? And then he got it anyway and the commune was destroyed in the process.
So the commune no longer serves his original purpose. What is motivating him now to want to rebuild it? It can’t be in order to have a hideout from the press.
Has he embraced the values/lifestyle of the community? ?Has he come to believe the community and it’s credo are worth fighting for, rebuilding?
See lessAfter a senior Barrister is entrapped by his own client, to recover control of his life, he must convince a Judge to set aside the client?s murder acquittal.
For me the story hook would be that he's seeking to overturn his greatest legal victory.
For me the story hook would be that he’s seeking to overturn his greatest legal victory.
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