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  1. Posted: August 26, 2017In: Action

    When two losers, tempted by the promise of money, get mixed up in the love triangle of two witches, they will need all their wits to get out of the mess.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 26, 2017 at 4:17 am

    Agree with foxtrot25, it reads more like a comedy than a thriller. ?And lose the losers description. ?Although in every aspect of the logline, they act like losers, victims of their own folly, which again, ?usually works better as a comedy. And it's not good enough to say "they will need all their wRead more

    Agree with foxtrot25, it reads more like a comedy than a thriller. ?And lose the losers description. ?Although in every aspect of the logline, they act like losers, victims of their own folly, which again, ?usually works better as a comedy.

    And it’s not good enough to say “they will need all their wits to get out of the mess” ?because that is standard operating procedure in every plot line: ?complications and crises build to the point that it requires all the wits, courage and strength the character has to extricated himself from the dramatic predicament and prevail.

    As a result of getting mixed up with 2 witches, what becomes their objective goal? ?And what’s at stake? ?What’s the worst thing that will happen to them if they “don’t get out of the mess”?

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Drama

    After a twister transports a lonely Kansas farm girl to a magical land, she sets out on a dangerous journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

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    Added an answer on August 25, 2017 at 10:59 pm

    Yes she wants to return home -- to the safety ?of the familiar. ?Oz is a more hostile, dangerous world than Kansas ?(tornadoes excepted). The "lesson learned" is that she comes to appreciate that home. ?She doesn't just need to return to Kansas ?to be safe -- she wants to return to Kansas to be withRead more

    Yes she wants to return home — to the safety ?of the familiar. ?Oz is a more hostile, dangerous world than Kansas ?(tornadoes excepted). The “lesson learned” is that she comes to appreciate that home. ?She doesn’t just need to return to Kansas ?to be safe — she wants to return to Kansas to be with the people she loves.

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  3. Posted: August 20, 2017In: Fantasy

    After a police station is attacked, a supernatural mercenary in custody must work with mundane cops to defend it from a group of faeries seeking the powerful artifact she stole.

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    Added an answer on August 25, 2017 at 9:55 pm

    A point of cognitive confusion for me when I first read the logline is how merely mortal cops can hold a supernatural being in custody. ?What the...? ? How can that happen if she is truly supernatural? Well, come to find out, she's voluntarily submitting to custody. ?But the logline ?doesn't informRead more

    A point of cognitive confusion for me when I first read the logline is how merely mortal cops can hold a supernatural being in custody. ?What the…? ? How can that happen if she is truly supernatural? Well, come to find out, she’s voluntarily submitting to custody. ?But the logline ?doesn’t inform us on that point.

    fwiw

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